00:05:999 (5) i kinda prefer this as a 1/2 so the trumpet note falls on the tail, maybe even two circles like 00:08:263
nah the spacing/pattern is intentional for the vocals being a lot weaker than 00:28:357 (3,4,5,6)
i will give you $0 to remove the red anchors on these
00:40:114 (1)
00:57:802 (7)
03:11:953 (5)
03:30:066 (1)
01:09:961 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) i would spread out more with these as a prelude to the kiai, feels cramped
03:19:866 (1) id make this a 1/1 because going into the jazz with 03:17:036 (1) means you legally must keep the trend going. also because you primarily follow the brass later on in the section anyway, this bit just felt detached
not a bad idea but i still wanna keep so the density of 03:19:866 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) better compliments the drums
03:44:488 (4,5) positioning this right between slider 2 and 3 feels cooler + cool visual + vibe
that would undermine all the visual spacing between 03:44:205 (3,4) + the rest of these tho
03:48:025 (5,6,7,1) this angle is pretty wide compared to other instances of this pattern ex: 01:25:386, 02:40:243. moving 5 and 6 down to make the angle tighter gives you this cool looking pattern: https://ibb.co/PGFYNM5
04:00:054 (1,2,3) the direct copy paste doesnt sit right with me, a 15-20 deg rotation would look cool?