00:42:270 (1) - i don't think this feels good at all, the kick is much more prominent here just because you're choosing to ignore half of the sounds you're trying to express (00:42:553 (4,4,3) -). expressing it as such would feel better: https://i.imgur.com/STN9YSk.jpeg but i don't actually like doing 3 note cutstreams because they're pretty awkward in general. it's up to you.
00:45:855 (1) - this cut is pleasant, but then its feeling is destroyed when you dont emphasize the same sound right here 00:46:138 (4) -
00:51:327 (1) - i don't like the rhythm here you're using at all, it feels very weak for a transition. try something like this where you can have more rhythmic diversity but also still properly express the vocals: https://i.imgur.com/g3HfrhI.jpeg
spacing between 01:01:516 (1,1) - makes 01:01:987 (4,5) - feel weird, would recommend keeping it more proportional to the time between notes.
01:25:478 (1,1) - and 01:26:421 (5,1) - , this isn't as confusing as the one above but i think you could still benefit some from moving the slider closer.
00:31:516 (2) - you have a symmetrical thing going on here so this is a tiny bit aesthetically inconsistent. you could move 00:30:195 (1) - https://i.imgur.com/Pnc56gs.jpeg (here) to keep it consistent, alternatively you could just make 00:31:516 (2) symmetrical.
01:19:346 (1,2) - the nc here actually made me think it was signaling some kind of change like to 1/6th or something, there is nothing that really justifies this i think it can only really confuse the player.