00:05:148 ~ 00:07:148 -
I think you're following the guitar in this section, but the current pattern you mapped didn't clarify your intention.
You could add a note at 00:05:719 & 00:06:005 to follow the guitar entirely and keep the density, the music is still intense in this section, so the density should be kept to represent the music properly.
00:22:434 ~ Could probably add a note here to differenciate this pattern from 00:21:434 (117,118,119) and to properly represent the abrupt re-introduction of vocals.
02:30:934 - Map? 02:30:291 (1031,1032,1033,1034,1035,1036,1037,1038) has the same structure and intensity as 02:31:434 (1039,1040,1041,1042,1043,1044,1045,1046,1047) and 02:32:077 (1045) is mapped
02:34:362, 02:34:434 - Map? Same sounds in preceding sections were mapped with 1/4s (02:33:148 (1052,1053,1054) and 02:33:719 (1057,1058,1059)). Also doesn't break break guidelines.