Ego Rock

The sudden change from large spacing 00:10:545 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) to relatively short spacing 00:11:478 (1,2,3,4,5) while the song keeps almost the same intensity makes no sense to me, you can try to even the spacing out so it feels more natural and according the song :)

00:10:945 (2,3,4) - the flow here feels bad since you have to go from low spacing to high on the same angle, even just flipping the direction of the triple would not other add better emphasis but feel better to play https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18821044/d1ce

00:12:145 (5,6) - spacing here should be buffed, its so much smaller than what you have going on right now

00:14:145 (3,4,5) - can move further from 00:13:878 (2)

00:18:678 (6,7) - I'd get rid of this jump since its pretty unexpected and doesn't represent anything important on the song

00:19:611 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - better nc usage would be https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18821048/c93f

00:22:811 (3,1) - i know you are following the vocals here but the bass is really prominent, it would be more intuitive to add a stacked note under the 3 like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18821050/6ed4

00:24:145 (8,1) - I feel the vocal part at 00:24:411 is strong enough to be represented with a slider. Could do a 1/2 to continue your pattern or a 1/1 slider to bring intensity just a bit down.
Ex. 1 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18782496/c53f
Ex. 2 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18782499/5fee

00:25:211 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Could have different patterns here to represent the music a bit more.

00:28:145 (3,4) - similarily i feel this is also under mapped you are missing out on a lot of the music that should be at least be somewhat represented in the map

00:28:411 should be circle instead of slider tail

00:29:745 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is flipped pattern of 00:21:211 (1,2,3,4,5,6) However I feel the vocal part that both sections are following are different. Could change up the pattern here to provide more contrast.
Ex. 1 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18782542/e507
Ex. 2 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18782544/172c

00:33:211 (6) - why kick slider? you can make it a normal circle or just a normal slider instead

00:34:811 (6,7) - these notes should be stacked as well as the distinct change in her voice/lyrics is at 00:35:078 (8,9) - which is where the movement should change

00:35:078 (8,9) - Feels really extra spaced compared to the other parts of its section. Could stack it under 00:34:811 (6) to have it feel a bit more uniform while still following the pattern.

00:35:078 (8) - you should nc this

00:39:345 (1,2) - Similar to #3924235 it just feels really extra spaced. Could stack 00:39:345 (1) under 00:38:278 (1) and move 00:39:478 (2) slightly to have the spacing balanced between 00:39:345 (1,3)
Ex. - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18782553/a126

00:40:145 (1,2,3) - this is just an example, but you can change the cursor movement to emphasize the finish sound https://i.azu.pw/osu!_qBYl.jpg

i would not recommend stopping the aim in kiai

00:43:345 (6,7) - #3924235 Could move 00:43:345 (6) lower to be similar to the spacing of 00:43:478 (7,8)

00:44:811 (4,5) - maybe nerf it and u can buff the spacing on these sliders 00:45:078 (1,2) - cause sound on both slider is more intense than the circle imo. maybe something like

00:48:678 (3) - can move further from 00:48:811 (4)

00:49:478 (1,2) - i know you are going for a lot of symmetry in your map but the pitch change is very audible and it feels weird not having some sort of spacing increase here compared to 00:48:945 (1,2) -

00:58:011 (1,2) - same

00:58:811 (4) - nc here makes more sense rather than 00:59:345 (1) -

01:04:011 (1) - could ctrl + g this to have it flow into each other

01:14:545 (1,2,3) - Pattern here doesn't seem to be following anything specific. Could change it up to follow the vocals here.
Ex. - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18782568/13ab

01:15:745 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - You have the chance to make this pattern symetrical and appealing to the eye if you do this

01:16:945 (1,2,1) - i dont really get the sudden use of anti jumps here when you havent implemented it anywhere else to suggest using it. i think 01:17:078 (2,1) - should have way larger spacing as this is one of the most intense parts of the song

01:24:945 (10) - 01:25:211 feels strong enough to be an active note. Could do a 3 note pattern here or 3/4 slider into 1 note.

01:27:078 (1) - maybe change it to slider cause the sound there is more like hold than stop imo

01:27:345 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - i like this

01:29:745 (4,5,6) 01:30:812 (2,3,4) - you can just make the flow looks like 01:28:678 (1,2,3)

01:31:611 (1,2) - #3924235 The spacing between these two is very massive. Could stack 01:31:478 (6) under 01:30:812 (2) and 01:31:611 (1) under 01:30:545 (1) to continue your patterning.
Ex. - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18782592/071d

01:33:478 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:33:478 (1,2) and 01:33:878 (4,5) are the most spaced out in the pattern but I feel the emphasis should lie with 01:33:611 (2,3,4) as they land on important sounds. You could nerf the spacing between 01:33:478 (1,2) and 01:33:878 (4,5) to put more emphasis on 01:33:611 (2,3,4)
Ex. - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18782608/4c77

01:33:745 (3,4,5) - this is poor flow and difficult for players to click

01:34:145 (1,2,3) nice

01:46:811 (2,1) - Could space this out more putting emphasis on 01:47:078 (1)

01:48:145 (5,6,1) - Could space out 01:48:411 (6,1) to give more emphasis on 01:48:678 (1) and move 01:48:411 (6) close to 01:48:145 (5) to be a bit more consistent in the spacing for this section.
Ex. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18782617/bdd6