00:47:905 - can do something like to keep double structure like 00:46:453 (46453|1,46453|0,46937|1,46937|0) -
01:32:663 (92663|2,92784|3) - i think this should be differentiated from the phone noise at 01:32:179 - so can rearrange like or just swap columns of 01:32:663 (92663|2,92784|3) - if you would like to keep the doubles on left hand.
Avoid using chords during consecutive 1/4 note patterns. However, using a chord to begin or to end a pattern is fine.
i think this may be a missnap and meant to be on the 1/2
same with 01:38:348 (98348|1) -
Originally I wanted them on the 1/4 in order to follow the synth and I figured that it would be alright to break the guideline since it's relatively short and only 120 bpm.
....buuuuuuut I'd rather not deal with rankability issue over a normal diff so I'll just put them on the 1/2. it doesn't feel off to play either so I'll change stuff up to be safe!
01:35:082 (95082|0,95203|2,95324|1,95324|3,95566|3,95687|1,95808|0,95808|2) - .
In the following part, it seems that the intention was probably to maintain the symmetry of the pattern. However, the same 1/2 col is inevitably created only in one pattern.
This is thought to be a problem caused by the 1/2 double note below.
Therefore, i carefully advise you to change the location of the 1/2 double note below and symmetric the pattern above.
If this is changed, it is expected that there will be no problem with the number of notes on the left and right, and I think it is a reasonable pattern.
|0|1|2|3|
01:46:937 (106937|1,107179|1,107421|0,107542|1) - .
The note appears twice in |1|col and then into |0|col and |1|col in 1/4. I think this will be a little difficult for a player who plays Normal.
Also during the three bars |0| and |1| It looks like there are too many notes in the column.
So, I think |0| -> |1| -> |2| -> |3| -> |2| -> |1| -> |0| While maintaining the shape of, I would like to think about making 1/4 in a slightly dispersed form.
02:01:937 (121937|2,121937|3) - should be differentiated from 02:01:453 (121453|3,121453|2) - wf vs wc so can just move either note to col 1 ( would be cute to use both outer columns
So I do want to keep the jack at 02:01:937 (121937|2,122179|2) - BUT hey I'm glad you enjoy [14] doubles too! I just wanna make sure I can preserve the jack and keep the [14] doubles at 02:02:421 (122421|3,122421|0) - and 02:03:389 (123389|3,123389|0) -
Changed it to a [13] double!