00:24:151 (24151|2), 00:25:293 (25293|3) - LNs should be 1/2 only as thats their actual length
01:15:439 ~ 01:20:011
The gap with upper diff is too close, suggest reduce the graces and doubles.
01:15:439 ~ 01:17:725
In this part you can reduce the 1/4 notes use that will look like this
And I think this pattern still suitable with the song session
01:17:725 ~ 01:20:011
Then let's make it little progressive with replacing the anchors for kick sounds and added more 1/4 notes.
But why I'm not added 1/4 note here 01:19:225 and 01:19:511? Cuz the hihat melody are changed. Then double here 01:19:154 and 01:19:725 are for the clap sounds
01:25:151 (85151|2,85293|3) - shouldn't these be layered like 01:20:579 (80579|2,80579|3,80722|0,80722|1)?
01:51:883 (111883|0,111883|1,112008|3,112008|0,112133|1,112133|2,112195|3,112258|1,112258|0) - the layering here is definitely too hard for a hard diff, especially on the left hand. Consider making 01:52:133 (112133|2,112133|1) a single