Can you jack the notes for the same pitch like these ones? 00:02:860 (2860|4,3114|5) - 00:10:996 (10996|4,11250|3) -
00:47:860 (47860|1,47860|0) - why are there two LNs here? I dont hear any difference to the LNs before it, so I think it should just be one
01:10:230 - 01:32:298 - , Maybe it's just me but, I think there is some inconsistency about the drum being jack or not? Example 01:11:092 (71092|6,71264|6) - , 01:23:505 (83505|0,83678|0) - etc. jack on the drum, while others like 01:12:471 - , 01:16:609 - etc are not.
01:11:781 (71781|4,71954|5) - I would suggest to swap there notes col. I don't hear this 01:11:954 (71954|5,72126|5,72298|5) - fit with any sound imo.
01:15:747 (75747|2) - I prefer to move this to column 7 so that this stair 01:15:661 (75661|5,75704|4,75747|3) - will be clearer to recognise
02:01:264 - the intensity of the map should match the intensity of the song, so as the buildup gets more tense I think it should get more difficult. However, having LNs on three columns makes it easier near the end of the build up and you miss out on mapping all the fast intense sounds at 02:03:333. I would recommend remapping this buildup for that
The intense sound is represented by 02:03:333 (123333|6) - and each sound is with LN to show you how the sounds are intensified. But i will think in this. Maybe a remapping is better and im blind.
02:01:954 - this transition is a bit finnicky
first 02:03:161 (123161|6) should be moved up to 02:03:333 if you are mapping to the siren
There should be another note at 02:03:333 and 02:02:298 as well to make a chord.
You can add notes to fill in the empty space afterwards if you want
Something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18820394/d44d (blue notes optional)
the musical phrase starting at 02:03:333 outlines an F# minor seventh chord. 03:04:712 (184712|4) is the F#, 03:05:057 (185057|3) is the A, and 03:05:057 (185057|3) should be the C# and the E. The two notes before it should be singles because the piano is playing a single note, but at 03:05:057 it comes to rest as it completes the chord with two notes, so it should be a double
03:10:230 (190230|4,190230|3,190747|2,190919|3) - it's not very clear what these are mapped to, if the piano is the rice what is the reason for having the funky LN spacebar release?
03:21:436 (201436|3) - this should probably be moved up to the white line, it feels awkward to have a staggered entry when all the strings come in on the same beat
03:47:988 (227988|0,228161|0,228333|0,228505|0) - anchor here didn't represent anything imo, would suggest to re-arrange it
03:57:988 (237988|0,238161|0,238333|0,238678|0,238850|0,239109|0,239367|0,239540|0,239712|0) - I would suggest to spread this notes, it seems a bit crowded at col 1
04:16:781 - 04:26:092 - sound in this section feel similar yet it mapped it a bit different. Obvious things I can find on this inconsistency is this shield 04:18:333 (258333|4,258592|4) - . section like 04:16:781 - , 04:20:919 - etc have no shield like that. I would suggest to re-map this a bit make all the pattern similar between section
04:35:230 (275230|0,275402|1,275574|0,275747|1,275919|0,276092|1,276264|0,276436|1,276609|0,276781|1,276954|0,277126|1,277298|0,277385|1) - One hand trill on here is not comfortable and didn't represent anything imo. Would suggest to spread it out
04:46:954 (286954|0) - minor thing, I would suggest to move this to col 7 or anywhere depend on your style, it's not creating 04:46:781 (286781|0,286954|0,287126|0) - , they not representing anything imo
05:01:092 (301092|2,302298|3) - and 05:09:195 (309195|4,309712|5) - I think LN these are a little redundant because sound here is weak and they didn't last very long, so that doesn't need to add them here.