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00:07:151 (7) - you could place this slider on top of 00:07:319 (1) - to give some nice emphasis
https://i.gyazo.com/d7eda117709d4548648a2199e7cb6ebb.png

00:15:409 (1) - could give this pattern more room to breathe seems extremely cramped
https://i.gyazo.com/da07c2745efa64bc66c68a29a78bf9fe.jpg

00:25:690 (5,6) - could probs ctrl + g rhythm

00:57:207 (4) - NC because new vocal phrase starts on this downbeat

01:05:971 (9) - drums are noticeably stronger here, maybe make this a 9-note burst or increase sv?

01:07:656 (4,5) - 01:10:353 (5,1) - 01:23:836 (4,5) - 02:39:342 (4,5) - 02:44:736 (4,1) - Increase spacing to emphasize syncopation. Something like 02:55:522 (4,5) - is fine

01:38:162 (8,9) - this looks a bit weird, try moving 9 like this for better visuals:

01:39:342 (5,1,2) - seems a bit overkill rhythm and spacing wise if you decide to keep the pattern I would opt to turn 01:39:510 (1,2,3) - into a 1/1 slider should be a little less strenuous for the player https://i.gyazo.com/9ea77251f3a3051e320df69efdeac927.jpg

01:52:488 (2) - i think this works better:

(awesome part btw)

02:03:612 (2,3,4,5) - this rhythm could be improved a bit imo maybe something like this to highlight that background guitar https://i.gyazo.com/1dda7ea87cf2be5c883811ef35498ee3.jpg

if you decide to change I would also do the same change to 02:00:915 (2,3,4,5) & 02:06:308 (2,3,4,5)

02:11:196 (1) - I would omit this note idk just sounds better going into a slow section could just be me though

02:17:432 (5) - approach angle here looks... okay but imperfect enough to trigger me. maybe move this (and by extension 02:15:746 (2)) up a tiny bit?

02:20:803 (1,2,3,1,1,1,1,1) - this can be easily misread, try doing something like this instead:

random NC mod lmao 02:21:364 (1,1,1,1,1) - 02:29:735 (1,1,1,1) - 02:59:229 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Try to keep your NC consistent~

Since you've been using NC for the 1/2 parts more often throughout the song, I recommend making the 1/3 streams just a single combo chain.

i wouldnt try to over complicate this rhythm keeping the rhythm pattern would be fine 02:47:769 (3) -
https://i.gyazo.com/196c7d2e0aadb9b088153af26e79f5b8.png

02:55:185 (3) - this would look better if the slidertail perfectly overlaps (i.e. sits on) the slidertrack of 02:55:690 (5)

02:57:207 (1) - not sure about this overlap with 02:56:870 (9), try doing this instead:

(here 02:56:870 (9) was moved up, 02:57:207 (1)'s slidertail perfectly overlaps with 02:56:533 (7), and 02:58:218 (6,7,8,9) is moved down)

02:59:229 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - NC all, separate them from other objects, and maybe decrease spacing in each burst- This will make them easier to read and will make the pattern feel less cluttered visually.

NC'ing all will also be more consistent with 02:21:364 (1,1,1,1) -

If done, optionally un-NC 03:10:859 (1,1,1,1) - because it's in 1/2 and may be read as 1/3

03:30:072 (1) - really cool