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00:02:225 - here there is a noise before the entrance, it is not obligatory but I think it would be nice to put a note to symbolize it

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I will not take this suggestion. Thx.

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You seem to be using double for drums, but 00:10:011 (10011|2,10011|3) - should not be so, it is recommended to cut it to single.

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Done.

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Fixed.

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00:11:011 is this supposed to be snapped to the quiet snare here? if so then it needs to be moved to 00:11:058

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Fixed.

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I agree with the first mod but the second one is not a ghost note, i can hear a sound at the background.

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00:15:654 this note isn't snapped correctly. it should start at 00:15:630

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Fixed.

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00:16:151 (16151|0) - can be moved to col 4 make the flow smoother, where the distribution of notes is not biased on one side only

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Done

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00:16:868 (16868|3) - note should be on 00:16:797 if syncing to vocals(?)

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Fixed.

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reopening for a suggestion

i agree on placing the note in 00:16:797 but the note in 00:16:868 should be brought back because playing the note in 00:16:797 alone feels so off (it's like the vocal plays on 2 ticks because of the way it's pronounced(?))

also because in other points like 00:21:439, the vocal starts in the white tick so adding back the note in 00:16:868 can be justifiable

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Fixed.

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I recommand make 00:28:761 (28761|2,28761|3) - and 00:33:332 (33332|2,33332|1) - triple because I think it is necessary to use different numbers of notes to distinguish the different sounds. For example, 00:28:761 (28761|3,28761|2,28868|0,28868|1) - and 00:28:439 (28439|2,28439|3,28582|0,28582|1) - are so similar but the sound a totally different. If you don't want to make it so weird to play you can also make 00:28:868 (28868|0,28868|1) - and 00:33:439 (33439|0,33439|3) - single.

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I will not accept this suggestion because the notes 00:28:761 (28761|2,28761|3) - and 00:33:332 (33332|2,33332|1) - need to be doubles. You dont hear the principal sound at the same time as these notes. For example, in this part you can hear same sounds 00:33:725 (33725|3,33725|0,33725|2) - (Idk how to explain that sound with the strong sound).

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00:32:722 (32722|3,32722|2,32793|1,32793|0) - Having this as a full jt kinda blends so many different sounds together.
How about trying to differentiate the sounds a bit more. In this case, 00:32:865 (32865|3,32865|2,32936|0,32936|1) can be doubles since they r kicks, so how about making these into sth like

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Done

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00:33:008 (33008|3,33043|2,33079|1,33115|0,33151|3,33186|2,33222|0) - There are 2 different sounds here, but since they r both using 1/8, and there's no gap, both of them blend in together. How about making 00:33:008 (33008|3,33043|2,33079|1,33115|0) into 1/12 and move 00:33:186 (33186|2) to col 2

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Done

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00:33:365 (33365|0,33508|1) - these sounds r the same, might as well have them on the same col (suggesting col 2)

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Done

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00:35:404 (35404|1) - I think this note is unnecessary because the sound stops before that note

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Fixed.

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Maybe you can make 00:36:082 (36082|2,36225|3) - into minijacks to correspond to the same pitch electronic sound?

like this

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I understand the idea and why do you suggest this but i dont like these minijacks, same as 02:19:904 (139904|2,139904|0,139904|1,139966|1,140029|0,140029|2,140029|3,140091|2,140154|0,140154|1,140154|3) - but in that case i dont have other idea. Thx.

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I think the sounds are very different to make the same in both of parts. For that reason, i will not take this suggestion. I can explain better the idea if you want.

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00:37:725 - there's a minor glitch in the sound so i suggest u can make this triple as lns

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00:38:011 (38011|3,38297|0) - also i guess you can extend these lns to the fullest so u can emphasize the glitch more?

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oops accidentally resolved

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00:42:297 (42297|2,42297|0) - you can make these two as 1/2 and 1/4 lns to emphasize that trailing off sound
00:42:582 (42582|3,42868|0) - extend for glitch emphasis again

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00:47:154 (47154|3,47439|1,51725|2,52011|0) - extend
00:52:297 (52297|3,52297|2) - shorten to 1/2 lns to represent the trail off sound more

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I will take "00:52:297 (52297|3,52297|2) - shorten to 1/2 lns to represent the trail off sound more" but the rest i will not accept. Fixed and thx.

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00:38:011 (38011|2,38011|3,38011|1,38297|2,38297|1,38297|0,38582|2,38582|1,38582|3) - 1/2 of these places both have a cut-off sound that you can express.

Also, you can shorten 00:38:011 (38011|1,38297|2,38582|1) - by 1/4, but it's up to you.

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same in 00:42:582 - etc.

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Im ok with the simple LN's. I dont want something special, just to be ok. Im not focus in LN's in this map. Thx for the suggestion.

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I will not take this suggestion because is a X diff, there is not a problem to do here and the note 00:39:297 (39297|3) - represent the same as 00:39:154 (39154|1,39154|3,39154|0) - , need to be in the same column.

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00:39:865 - so as not to make it too half-hearted, because the sound here is too short if given only 2 LN with 1 LN is 1/4

you better make it all 1/2 so that it makes the game not too made so that it doesn't seem to be "harder to press"

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Done

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00:40:011 (40011|3,40011|2,40154|1,40225|3,40297|0,40297|2,40297|1) - You could do something LN-y here for this, potentially like https://imgur.com/a/UBCWXl6

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Done.

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00:40:154 this sound here has a bit of a reverb effect to it so to match that you can just make this a single. it would be better fit the song and what's going on currently in said song.

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Fixed.

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00:41:297 (41297|2,41368|2) - better to move this to col4 because 00:41:297 is 3/4 length away from 00:41:082 (41082|3) -

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I can understand the idea but that minijack is the same sound as 00:41:154 (41154|2,41154|1) - , for that reason, need to be in the same column.

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Done.

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Done.

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00:42:297 this sound is rather intense enough for you to make it 2 lns and one single note rather than one single ln.

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Fixed.

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00:44:797 (44797|0) - could be a jump

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Fixed.

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00:46:118 (46118|3,46118|1,46225|0,46225|2,46332|1,46332|0,46439|3,46439|2,46547|0,46547|1) - the partten here is unbalanced for the left and right hands. So I suggest to do like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18587703/4143

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Done.

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00:46:582 (46582) - missing note

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I can hear a sound there. I will keep the note.

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00:47:936 (47936|2) - no sound here

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In 00:47:936 (47936|2) - there is a sound but is very different as the rest of that part. I can remove it just for that reason. The sound is more similar as 00:48:079 (48079|3) -

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A

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00:50:297 I think you shouldn't make this a double since it would be frustrating to play given how the double is arranged currently. Also, for consistency purposes, you don't map any of the 1/8 notes with doubles at the start.

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Fixed.

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I like this part and i like the "old version of free pp" there. So i will keep this part and if a BN want to change it, i will give you kudos.

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00:54:297 - missing note?

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Done.

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Done.

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00:57:154 - remove one note, sounds a little softer than the other quads
01:00:868 (60868|1,61154|0) - 01:05:439 (65439|0,65725|3) - 01:10:011 (70011|3,70297|0) - more extending
01:09:725 (69725|3) - 1/2 ln to emphasize trailing off glitch again

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To the first mod, i will take it, the second i will not and i dont understand the third mod, can you explain me or send a example pls? Thx u

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The Ln represent the same as 00:57:154 (57154|3) - and 00:58:297 (58297|0) - . The sound is the cornet or the instrument that you can hear.

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Done.

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01:02:579 (62579|1,62579|0,62579|3) - previously, theres no instance where the layering is this thick after a burst. Change it to a double and 01:02:436 (62436|3,62436|2) to a single

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Done

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Very sus but i will take it. Fixed.

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01:04:865 Missing note.

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Fixed

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How about swapping 01:05:082 (65082|2,65118|3,65154|2,65439|3) - col 3 and col 4, I think if you insert 1/4minijack in 1/8, place it in col 4 The feel will be better than col 3 (1/2/3/4)

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Done.

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01:05:725 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18587706/f015 suggest have LN release here because it can express the melody's direction.

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I will not take this suggestion. I think could be like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18590868/61ad but its very annoying to play and will be better like the old pattern to play and read.

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01:14:436 - till 01:17:151 - I'm confused what you want to follow this part, where diff insane is more rational than what you follow here

my suggestion is to follow what is done in diff insane so that it is clearer what you follow

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01:18:008 01:41:883 02:17:133 Podrían ser dobles

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Fixed

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01:22:079 (82079|2) - no violin sound here

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I know the part is focusing the violin but that note represent the same as 01:17:508 (77508|2) -

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01:22:725 (82725|3,82725|2,82797|1,82797|0) - suggest 01:22:797 (82797|0,82797|1) - triple this because I think the melody and sound here is very simple and easy to distinguish. So also if you want a partten that not so weird you can make 01:22:725 (82725|3,82725|2) - single.

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I think, a triple there will be very annoying to play. Also the single note is not correct because you can hear the violin and an extra sound. I will not accept this.

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01:24:297 - continue the 1/4th stream to 01:24:582 violin is still hearable

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Fixed.

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01:35:758 - for a more followable PR, you can do this

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Done

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column 1|2|3|4 for reference

01:37:654 (97654|2) - you might consider moving this to column 4 (the jacks emphasize the sound)
01:39:029 (99029|0) - move to column 2
01:39:154 (99154|1) - move to column 1
01:43:029 (103029|0) - move to column 3
01:49:779 (109779|1) - move to column 1 (different pitch)
01:49:904 (109904|0) - move to column 3

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I will take some of them. Fixed.

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01:41:633 (101633|3) - this is different from this 01:41:258 (101258|3,101383|3,101508|3) -

you can move this 01:41:633 (101633|3) - to col 2

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Done

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02:00:154 (120154|1) - 1/2 ln for the trailing off sound

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Fixed.

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02:09:039 (129039|2,129164|2,129258|2,129383|2,129508|2,129633|2) - estas creando un longjack, podrías cambiar alguna que otra nota de columna

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Fixed

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02:11:529 (131529|0) - should be in 02:11:466 - and move 02:11:529 (131529|3) - to column 3

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Fixed.

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02:13:383 (133383|0) - ghost note.

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Fixed

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02:15:008 - you can make it like this to follow the existing rhythm

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Done

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02:15:383 - can add 1, 1/2 LN in col 2 so it's not far from insane diff. where insane uses trickier things

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Done

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02:15:404 (135404|1,135529|1) - unnecessary jack here suggest move 02:15:529 (135529|1) - to col1

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Done.

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02:17:904 and 02:18:029 - can be mapped as 1/8 graces (3 notes)
02:20:404 (140404|3,140654|0) - extend

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I will give u a Kudosu for the idea but i will make LN's in that part. Thx.

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02:21:320 - triple
02:21:529 - double

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Done.

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Applied just in the second one.

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02:24:508 - very weird to ignore the burst here, especially short ones as u have been mapping them consistently before

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In 02:24:508 i just use a single to not be the only doubble before a burst

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02:27:758 (147758|2) - might have missed this

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Sowy

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Same reason as #3717191/9974292

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02:27:904 (147904|0,147904|1,148279|3) - suggest triple and double these. The sound here is very obvious.

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I will not take this suggestion because i think is ok like this.

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02:32:279 (152279|3) - shorten this to a 1/4 ln to make way for another note in 02:32:404 -

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after adding another note, you might wanna consider mapping the triples like this in order to emphasize the glitch
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18561228/4927

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I will not take this suggestion. Thx.

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