You seem to be using double for drums, but 00:10:011 (10011|2,10011|3) - should not be so, it is recommended to cut it to single.
00:10:439 (10439|1,10439|0) - move these to 00:10:475 (like what you did to 00:15:047 (15047|3,15047|1))
00:15:011 (15011|1,15011|3) - unsnapped note, the sound start at 00:15:058 (1/6 grid)
ghost note at 00:15:297 (15297|1) -
reopening for a suggestion
i agree on placing the note in 00:16:797 but the note in 00:16:868 should be brought back because playing the note in 00:16:797 alone feels so off (it's like the vocal plays on 2 ticks because of the way it's pronounced(?))
also because in other points like 00:21:439, the vocal starts in the white tick so adding back the note in 00:16:868 can be justifiable
I recommand make 00:28:761 (28761|2,28761|3) - and 00:33:332 (33332|2,33332|1) - triple because I think it is necessary to use different numbers of notes to distinguish the different sounds. For example, 00:28:761 (28761|3,28761|2,28868|0,28868|1) - and 00:28:439 (28439|2,28439|3,28582|0,28582|1) - are so similar but the sound a totally different. If you don't want to make it so weird to play you can also make 00:28:868 (28868|0,28868|1) - and 00:33:439 (33439|0,33439|3) - single.
I will not accept this suggestion because the notes 00:28:761 (28761|2,28761|3) - and 00:33:332 (33332|2,33332|1) - need to be doubles. You dont hear the principal sound at the same time as these notes. For example, in this part you can hear same sounds 00:33:725 (33725|3,33725|0,33725|2) - (Idk how to explain that sound with the strong sound).
00:32:722 (32722|3,32722|2,32793|1,32793|0) - Having this as a full jt kinda blends so many different sounds together.
How about trying to differentiate the sounds a bit more. In this case, 00:32:865 (32865|3,32865|2,32936|0,32936|1) can be doubles since they r kicks, so how about making these into sth like
00:33:008 (33008|3,33043|2,33079|1,33115|0,33151|3,33186|2,33222|0) - There are 2 different sounds here, but since they r both using 1/8, and there's no gap, both of them blend in together. How about making 00:33:008 (33008|3,33043|2,33079|1,33115|0) into 1/12 and move 00:33:186 (33186|2) to col 2
00:33:365 (33365|0,33508|1) - these sounds r the same, might as well have them on the same col (suggesting col 2)
00:35:404 (35404|1) - I think this note is unnecessary because the sound stops before that note
Maybe you can make 00:36:082 (36082|2,36225|3) - into minijacks to correspond to the same pitch electronic sound?
I understand the idea and why do you suggest this but i dont like these minijacks, same as 02:19:904 (139904|2,139904|0,139904|1,139966|1,140029|0,140029|2,140029|3,140091|2,140154|0,140154|1,140154|3) - but in that case i dont have other idea. Thx.
00:37:439 (37439|2,37439|0,37582|3,37582|1,37725|2,37725|3,37725|1) - and 00:42:011 (42011|1,42011|0,42154|3,42154|2,42297|2,42297|1,42297|0) - are nearly the same so for consistency they should be expressed in the similar partten. What a meant here is: 00:42:011 (42011|1,42011|0,42154|3,42154|2,42297|2,42297|0,42297|1) - is LN main but 00:37:439 (37439|2,37439|0,37582|3,37582|1,37725|2,37725|3,37725|1) - is rice main ?
00:38:011 (38011|3,38297|0) - also i guess you can extend these lns to the fullest so u can emphasize the glitch more?
00:42:297 (42297|2,42297|0) - you can make these two as 1/2 and 1/4 lns to emphasize that trailing off sound
00:42:582 (42582|3,42868|0) - extend for glitch emphasis again
00:47:154 (47154|3,47439|1,51725|2,52011|0) - extend
00:52:297 (52297|3,52297|2) - shorten to 1/2 lns to represent the trail off sound more
I will take "00:52:297 (52297|3,52297|2) - shorten to 1/2 lns to represent the trail off sound more" but the rest i will not accept. Fixed and thx.
00:38:011 (38011|2,38011|3,38011|1,38297|2,38297|1,38297|0,38582|2,38582|1,38582|3) - 1/2 of these places both have a cut-off sound that you can express.
Also, you can shorten 00:38:011 (38011|1,38297|2,38582|1) - by 1/4, but it's up to you.
00:38:939 (38939|3,39082|3,39154|3,39297|3,39439|3,39582|3,39725|3,39868|3,40011|3) - unnecessary anchor. I suggest move this note 00:39:297 (39297|3) - to col3
I will not take this suggestion because is a X diff, there is not a problem to do here and the note 00:39:297 (39297|3) - represent the same as 00:39:154 (39154|1,39154|3,39154|0) - , need to be in the same column.
00:40:011 (40011|3,40011|2,40154|1,40225|3,40297|0,40297|2,40297|1) - You could do something LN-y here for this, potentially like https://imgur.com/a/UBCWXl6
00:41:297 (41297|2,41368|2) - better to move this to col4 because 00:41:297 is 3/4 length away from 00:41:082 (41082|3) -
I can understand the idea but that minijack is the same sound as 00:41:154 (41154|2,41154|1) - , for that reason, need to be in the same column.
00:46:118 (46118|3,46118|1,46225|0,46225|2,46332|1,46332|0,46439|3,46439|2,46547|0,46547|1) - the partten here is unbalanced for the left and right hands. So I suggest to do like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18587703/4143
In 00:47:936 (47936|2) - there is a sound but is very different as the rest of that part. I can remove it just for that reason. The sound is more similar as 00:48:079 (48079|3) -
00:52:582 (52582|3,52618|2,52654|1,52689|0,52725|3,52761|2,52797|1,52832|0,52868|3,52939|0,53011|2,53082|1,53154|3,53189|2,53225|0,53261|1,53297|3,53332|2,53368|0,53404|1,53439|3,53475|2,53511|1,53547|0,53582|3,53618|2,53654|1,53689|0,53725|3,53761|2,53797|0,53832|1,53868|2,53904|3,53939|0,53975|1,54011|3,54047|2,54082|1,54118|0,54154|3,54189|2,54225|1,54261|0,54297|2,54368|3,54439|0,54475|1,54511|2,54547|3,54582|0) - This could be represented a LOT better, currently it just plays as a jumptrill and it doesn't really have much unique or fun representation to be played here, especially considering later down the line how difficult it becomes, try something like: https://imgur.com/a/HXio08d ?
00:57:154 - remove one note, sounds a little softer than the other quads
01:00:868 (60868|1,61154|0) - 01:05:439 (65439|0,65725|3) - 01:10:011 (70011|3,70297|0) - more extending
01:09:725 (69725|3) - 1/2 ln to emphasize trailing off glitch again
The Ln represent the same as 00:57:154 (57154|3) - and 00:58:297 (58297|0) - . The sound is the cornet or the instrument that you can hear.
01:02:579 (62579|1,62579|0,62579|3) - previously, theres no instance where the layering is this thick after a burst. Change it to a double and 01:02:436 (62436|3,62436|2) to a single
How about swapping 01:05:082 (65082|2,65118|3,65154|2,65439|3) - col 3 and col 4, I think if you insert 1/4minijack in 1/8, place it in col 4 The feel will be better than col 3 (1/2/3/4)
01:05:725 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18587706/f015 suggest have LN release here because it can express the melody's direction.
I will not take this suggestion. I think could be like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18590868/61ad but its very annoying to play and will be better like the old pattern to play and read.
I know the part is focusing the violin but that note represent the same as 01:17:508 (77508|2) -
01:22:725 (82725|3,82725|2,82797|1,82797|0) - suggest 01:22:797 (82797|0,82797|1) - triple this because I think the melody and sound here is very simple and easy to distinguish. So also if you want a partten that not so weird you can make 01:22:725 (82725|3,82725|2) - single.
column 1|2|3|4 for reference
01:37:654 (97654|2) - you might consider moving this to column 4 (the jacks emphasize the sound)
01:39:029 (99029|0) - move to column 2
01:39:154 (99154|1) - move to column 1
01:43:029 (103029|0) - move to column 3
01:49:779 (109779|1) - move to column 1 (different pitch)
01:49:904 (109904|0) - move to column 3
01:41:633 (101633|3) - this is different from this 01:41:258 (101258|3,101383|3,101508|3) -
you can move this 01:41:633 (101633|3) - to col 2
02:12:154 (132154|1,132154|0) - make this a 1/2 and 1/4 ln
02:12:279 (132279|2) - 1/2 ln
02:12:404 (132404|0,132654|2) - 02:16:404 (136404|0,136654|3) - extend
02:11:529 (131529|0) - should be in 02:11:466 - and move 02:11:529 (131529|3) - to column 3
02:15:404 (135404|1,135529|1) - unnecessary jack here suggest move 02:15:529 (135529|1) - to col1
02:17:904 and 02:18:029 - can be mapped as 1/8 graces (3 notes)
02:20:404 (140404|3,140654|0) - extend
02:32:279 (152279|3) - shorten this to a 1/4 ln to make way for another note in 02:32:404 -
after adding another note, you might wanna consider mapping the triples like this in order to emphasize the glitch
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18561228/4927