Edel Lilie (TV Size)

00:23:458 & 00:26:201 - personally think the vocal could be mapped. Since you follow the vocal and instrument in 00:27:916 (71) ~ 00:33:401 (96) -, only missing notes for vocal here (00:23:458 & 00:26:201) will make me feel a little bit weird.

00:27:921 - this has too little rest times the first rest time is 00:33:406 here after 26 notes without 1/1 break

00:29:116 00:30:401 00:30:487 - I'll suggest nerfing this section a bit by removing these notes, the difficulty gap between futsuu and muzu is a bit large imo
Also currently the patterns in 00:27:916 ~ 00:33:401 are continuous, but the continuous vocal starts on 00:30:658, so I think removing these would be nice for song representation too

00:29:973 - pretty minor suggestion but maybe change this from k k ddd to k kkk d? the violin sounds much uhh "rushed" at 00:29:973 so having the 1/4 there would emphasise it slightly better imo :3

00:29:973 - you cannot do this in muzus.

00:34:258 - move this note to 00:33:744? the music starts to build up and gets more intense here so having a full 2/1 break kinda goes against it :< applying this change would result in 4x1/1 being used here so breaks shouldn't be an issue either ;w;

00:38:892 - Why not add a finisher here? (Kat)
Might just be me, but leaving this blank feels weird while playing, especially since this is the start of the Kiai I feel like there should be a note, even if it's not a finisher.

00:47:030 - could remove this since there are only two vocal sounds (unlike 00:47:716), and this part feels denser than oni to me

treat this as a weak problem stamp

00:47:973 - delete this note to make this part slightly more doable :< this is the only part that has 3 1/4s consecutively used without even any 1/1 breaks which isn't really justified imo since this isn't even the most intense part of the song

00:49:001 - could improvise a triple here

00:55:092 - remove this note? right now this part having x xxx rhythm while the vocals have the same rhythm as the patterns that you use xxx x (like 00:55:521) feels a bit off while playing ;w;

00:57:573 - maybe delete this note? tbh i think having a break here would fit even without considering muzu requirements since the music also sorta switches up here if that makes sense

00:58:087 - really minor suggestion but since this is the first instance of a 1/4 doublet in the diff, maybe change it to kk to make it easier for players to react to? x xx x is pretty tricky for beginners after all and adding color change on top of it feels a bit trol, whereas after players get used to the rhythm here you can use the final kiai to spice things up :3

00:58:173 (113) -> 00:58:001 & 00:59:544 (120) -> 00:59:373 - #3589992

00:59:716 (121,122) - could change to don to emphasize higher instrument pitch at 01:00:144 (123)

01:02:721 - making this a big note would sound like a nice ending to this section :3

01:03:573 (138,139) - 01:04:258 (141,142) - 01:04:944 (144,145,146) - consider changing them to finisher to make consistent with 01:02:201 (132,133,134) -

01:04:944 (197,198) - 個人是覺得既然 01:03:573 跟 01:04:258 - 都放大音符了這裏不管小提琴個鼓點都下得更重不妨也弄成finisher能襯托得更棒一些摸魚摸魚

01:05:178 (143) - should be here 01:05:206 -

01:05:201 - should be on 1/3 instead, it's 1/3 in other diffs and I think that sounds more accurate

01:06:321 - this note should be finisher cuz you can clearly hear finish sound in song + to coincide other difficulties (expect inner oni)

01:07:516 - could remove this note since there's not really a sound, and to be consistent with 01:13:001. also Oni has 1/1 gaps and futsuu has many big gaps, so it'd be nice for the spread too

結尾段（01:09:058 to 01:10:087 以及 01:14:544 to 01:15:916）

個人是認爲在主旋律都保持著 x xx 的情況下譜面有時跟有時卻又map成3連也不是不行可是打起來就會感覺有點不明白這段到底是在跟些什麽。。。感覺要不就全跟 (eg. 01:09:401 move to 01:09:487）要不就全不跟 (eg. 01:10:087 - 加個note）玩起來也感覺比較consistent一些摸魚摸魚

01:10:516 - could remove since there's no synth sound here, and all other 1/4 patterns in the section are following synths

01:28:600 - spinner end unsnapped by -1ms lol
probably doesn't matter but the drain time is one ms shorter than other diffs and it makes me cry