DUET

00:11:337 (11337|2) - i feel this would be better on a 1/8 snap, at 00:11:274. it sounds more synced to the music

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18471848/a7bd

00:14:134 (14134|2,14134|1) - because this is the last note before it leads into the verse, i personally would make one of these an LN and hold it for at least 4 beats, maybe even more. it gives a more suspense effect and a more clear transition into the next section of music

additionally, i think u could move 00:14:134 (14134|2) to col 4 (1|2|3|4), since this note is much higher than everything else prior to it, it would have more pitch relevancy

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18471850/b3d9

00:14:134 (14134|1,14134|3) - why not just place the D7S on the LN and have it be one note, there's nothing additional playing here

00:19:084 (19084|0) - similar thing to #3605269, because this has a held suspense effect in the music, u could make this an LN for abt 2 beats to match that suspense in the map

00:20:318 - to use this timestamp as an example, since the piano has clear distinct pitches, you can relate the chord to the main melody, ex: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18466899/a1ee

00:22:281 (22281|1,22281|3) - to stay consistent with 00:21:203 (21203|0,21203|1), which musically is the same chord, i would rearrange this double to match 00:21:203 (21203|0,21203|1) . then move 00:22:640 (22640|2,22640|0) to stay consistent with 00:23:045 (23045|3,23045|2)

especially before the violin comes in, u have a lot of space to move notes around. my suggestion would be to have the same chords represented by the same emphasis and lane usage. this will obviously not be possible when the violin comes in, but at least until then, these should be consistent

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18471854/1b4e

00:26:516 (26516|1,26875|1,27234|1,27594|1,27953|1) - should keep visuals in mind, this anchor is quite distinct, though it doesnt impact gameplay much, itll be misrepresentative of the piano unless theres a clear reason (like piano hitting the same notes)

00:26:645 (26645|0,26645|2,26645|1) - i don't believe this works with the suggestion in #3605285 as the note is just a very straight one, no graces or anything

what u can do to distinguish this is have these as 2 short LNs. i understand that you want to reserver LNs for violin only, but in this case i don't know if theres much to do unless you choose to keep the triple here

i suggest to just have it just be on 1/4 LN so it's still different but not like violin length LN
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18471875/1db9

00:27:408 (27408|3) - should this be a double to stay consistent with other notes?

00:28:829 (28829|3,28829|2,28829|0,28829|1) - i don't believe that a quad is warranted here. the violin does come in, but the volume at which it comes in is very low, so the emphasis, at least to me doesn't need to be buffed into a quad. the most i would suggest is a triple, or even double since it sort of crescendos in, and starts off pretty soft

00:28:829 (28829|3) - 00:32:121 (32121|3) - 00:32:839 (32839|2,33179|3) - 00:36:412 (36412|0) - etc shouldn't these be 1/4 LNs to match the earlier emphasis? top diff so i think it should be deserved

00:30:639 (30639|1) - this could move to col 4 (1|2|3|4) since it's a higher note than 00:28:829 (28829|2). as a result, 00:30:639 (30639|3,30998|3) would have to be rearranged

generally pitch relevancy is represented like a piano, higher notes are on right, lower on left. this should not be a top priority bc perfect pitch relevancy can really mess up some areas and make the map uncomfortable, but when u have room to move stuff around, u could try to make it as relevant as possible

u could rearrange to something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18471922/6ed7

00:30:998 (30998|0) - this can be moved to col 2, and 00:32:121 (32121|2) to col 1, so 00:32:121 (32121|2,32839|1,33179|2) represents the rising of pitch in the violin more accurately

maybe rearrnage this section to something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18471927/b244

00:34:975 (34975|0) - u could move this to col 4, since its the highest note in this small section

00:36:412 (36412|0,36771|1,37131|2) - i would flip the direction of this 1/1 stream, as the violin is falling in pitch

since 00:35:334 (35334|2) takes up col 3, u could rearrange to something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18471931/9a53

00:37:490 (37490|3) - just an idea here, this violin sound sort of breaks off at 00:38:826 and continues shortly after. u could split this LN into two LNs to address this, it also makes a neat effect

something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18471941/627f https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18471938/bed0 (this section doesn't really fit in one screenshot lol)
additionally, this LN should be extended to 00:40:128, u can remove 00:40:128 (40128|3) to reduce cluttering

00:37:535 (37535|3) - this long ass LN can be simplified to 00:38:826 instead since i can't hear the resonance at that.
regarding this violin sound, 00:41:924 (41924|1) - i do think this should be cut into 2. one ending in 00:42:822. and another long note for the fade in violin in 00:43:002 and ending in 00:44:344.

00:40:128 (40128|1,40487|2,40846|1) - suggestion to rearrange these 3 to be in col 1, 2, 3 as the pitch in violin is rising

u could rearrange like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18472038/3200

00:45:468 (45468|1,45648|0,45827|1,46007|0,46186|1,46366|0,46546|1) - i personally would rather make it less of a trilling motion due to the piano doing a motif thats different from a trill (kinda like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18466903/387b )

00:46:660 (46660|1) - i like the grace roll effect here original mentioned in #3600395 , but i think this starts too early? i don't hear any roll when this 1/16 note occurs

my suggestion would be to move 00:46:637 (46637|0,46660|1,46727|3) to later, around 00:46:727 like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18471767/2d55

(make sure the ln tail isn't sticking out past 00:49:561)

00:46:772 (46772|1,46787|2) - why? you literally have the piano chart to reference snaps from lmao

00:46:815 - suggestion throughout the song, i think having 3 note graces can help add some cool variety to it since the piano plays a rolled chord https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18466905/929e you can use 1/8 or 1/6 if you want it to feel a little more dragged out

00:47:446 - this sound is very "small" / weak for it to be patterned as triples. i think you might have to just do double. but key and pitch wise, i hear 3 keys as a chord so i think it's okay? also, i think you can add a sound for 00:49:472 this weird string squeak because it's an obvious sound.

00:52:239 - there is a violin note here, so should be represented

u could do something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18472042/d49c

00:52:753 (52753|0) - would move to col 4 since it's a much higher note than the note right before it

u could do smth like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18472046/97ec

00:54:912 (54912|2,55316|2,55630|2,55994|2) - this 4 note anchor here makes this section very bias on the right hand and 3rd column, my suggestion would be to rearrange the notes to break the anchor and balance out this section more

something like this maybe https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18472048/68a0 a very small movement can fix two problems

01:02:763 (62763|3,62943|2,63122|1,63302|0) - i would connect these 4 LNs together rather than making them short 1/4 LNs, since the violin note is played for its full 1/2 duration

01:03:302 (63302|0) - this also feels like it's a bit too late, i feel its more suitable on 1/6 snap at 01:03:242

u could do something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18472051/a398

01:03:122 (63122|0,63242|0) - move the long note to column 3 to give way for the piano sound at 01:03:122 (63122|0) and not having a forced jack.

01:03:257 (63257|0) - ln needs resnapping to the end/beginning of the other LNs

01:03:841 (63841|2,63841|1,63841|0) - i feel like one of the As should be a storyboard hitsounds because 3 notes for this when other triple chords have been mapped as two and i hear no increase in intensity here is too much

01:04:185 (64185|2) - this seems a little late, i think its more on time on a 1/6 snap at 01:04:080
u would also need to shorten 01:03:392 (63392|3) 's LN tail to end at 01:04:080, something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18472058/1fb0

01:04:813 (64813|2) - since this is a low note compared to its surroundings, i would move this to col 1, and move 01:04:903 (64903|0) to col 3

01:05:173 (65173|1) - this feels a bit early, would be more suited on a 1/1 snap at 01:05:262

01:09:160 - 01:09:842 - i believe this is on a 1/3 snap. currently it doesn't feel like it lines up with the music, though this section is really mushed together and hard to hear lol

i believe the rhythm is something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18472071/a3c5

01:13:868 (73868|1) - i think this should be removed. there is no piano here, i do hear a very feint violin bend here, but at full speed, i don't think it's noticeable enough for it to be kept, and as a result, this appears as a ghost note

01:14:121 - missing note for piano, same thing at 01:15:737, 01:43:312, 01:49:151, and probably a few more throughout the map

01:14:492 (74492|2,74492|0) - why does this get 2 and 01:15:534 (75534|0) - gets just 1?
same situation at 00:44:165 (44165|2) -

01:15:175 (75175|1) - pretty minor, but u could make this a 1/4 LN to keep violin representation consistent, though not needed

01:15:534 (75534|3,75534|0) - would reduce this to a single or not represented at all, as the piano here is much quiter than the sounds around it

01:17:569 (77569|3) - i think this piano starts a different time than the violin. i believe it sounds like it starts at 1/1 snap at 01:17:659

u could move to something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18472092/a79d

01:20:043 (80043|3,80180|2,80359|1) - these should be 1/2 LNs, since the violin is held here. additionally, 01:20:043 (80043|3) should start at 01:19:953 to become a full 1/2 LN

would look something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18472098/4a6b

01:20:229 - would personally make this LN longer cuz the violin does a bit of a dragged out volume jump before making the sounds detached again

01:20:898 (80898|2,80898|3,80898|1) - i don't feel theres a need for a triple here. the notes aren't accented. i suggest to reduce to a double

01:22:656 (82656|3) - since there is no audible pause in violin, this LN should extend to 01:24:550

01:24:909 - why is this not a double? seems significent enough and there is two sounds there

01:26:440 (86440|2) - this should be moved down to 01:26:380 -

01:26:560 - sorry, missed this one. pls add a timing point here as well as its inherited point, then resnap everything within this window afterwards

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01:27:964 (87964|2) - for a similar reason in #3605480 , this LN can be extended to 01:29:004

01:30:464 - 01:31:930 - the piano here is pretty accented, but its around the same level of accent as 01:29:410 (89410|2,89410|0,89769|3,89771|0) , which is represented as a double. to keep this area consistent, would reduce these to doubles

01:34:600 - would personally move to the 4th column for the difference in how high the piano plays

01:39:955 - here the violin feels like its rising in volume just a little, my suggestion is that u could represent that by adding another LN at this timestamp, so u would hold two LNs down before heading into the next section

u would also have to remove 01:40:382 (100382|2) to give this LN room to end

something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18472120/8f6d. if u want to retain the triple suggested in #3600401 , u could do something like this instead https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18472121/f98c

01:39:955 (99955|2) - what's this meant to represent since there's just one continuous violin sound here

01:40:618 (100618|1) - i think it could be 3 notes since its a beginning of a new section and the piano plays a big chord, similar thing with 01:57:773 but id make it two notes

01:40:894 - 01:42:908 this area feels very biased on the right hand, as most 1/2 notes are played by the right hand, my suggestion would be to rearrange so its a more balanced stream

maybe something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18472125/18e0

01:43:481 - missing piano note here

u could rearrange to accomodate this note being added to smth like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18472128/b67a

01:45:109 (105109|0) - piano slows down quite a bit here but notes contradict that slow down by staying at the same speed

01:45:960 - personally don't think this needs to be a triple, the only one i've heard so far that could be justified is 01:40:382, as it starts the most intense section in the music. these two timestamps are not the same intensity of accent, so i would reduce triple at 01:45:960 to a double

01:46:920 aak u resolved the previous mod before i could add a reply lol

there is also a piano note missing here, but no rearrangement is needed as it doesn't create any weird jacks or anchors

01:48:516 (108516|3,108727|3) - seeing how this is one of the only jacks in this entire map, i would suggest to rearrange it so it can be removed

u could do something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18472134/a6c0

01:49:971 (109971|2,109971|3,109971|0) - if u want to keep this triple here, i suggest to reduce 01:49:121 (109121|1) to 01:49:763 so it creates room and removes the jack at 01:49:760 (109760|0,109971|0)

maybe something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18472138/6c13

01:52:209 (112209|0) - u could move this to col 2 to remove the jack at 01:51:953 (111953|0,112209|0)

u can rearrange this section to something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18472140/4427

01:57:007 (117007|3) - i think this LN should extend to 02:00:074, the violin never stops

01:57:088 the violin pitch changes here, so u could end 01:53:544 (113544|0) here and add a new LN, suggesting to col 4

u would need to move 02:00:074 (120074|3) to col 1 or 2 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18472145/4433

01:57:088 (117088|3) - shouldn't this start 1/8 earlier?

02:05:558 there is a similar effect here #3605366 , u could do something similar to what i suggested

maybe something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18472150/4a8b