Koyoi wa Hyouitsu na Egoist ~ Ego, Schizoid, Beat.

00:11:864 - Missing a note here

00:40:815 - I think can reverse the stream direction into the left to represent the pitch change, also to make some symetrical pattern like this -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18432996/8881

00:41:315 - tbh I kinda confused about the chord usage at this part, why is prominent kick here was represented with single? I guess it should be double? by percussion based, it should be:
00:41:315 - add a note
00:41:481 - remove a note
00:42:315 - add a note
00:42:481 - remove a note
00:43:981 - add a note
00:44:148 - remove a note
00:44:898 (44898|0) - remove, haven't on 1/4 stream section yet
00:44:981 - add a note
00:45:148 - remove a note

also need to rearrange if the pattern looks broked by the adjustment, or you have any intention on current pattern?

00:46:364 - Any particular reason why you stop doubling these from this point onwards? (see 00:45:197 (45197|2,45197|0), 00:44:697 (44697|2,44697|0), etc, all doubled regardless of having kick or not)

00:48:731 - based on previous flow, I think should be noted on col 1. 00:48:815 (48815|0) - to col 4

00:49:481 (49481|2,49648|2,49815|2,49981|2,50148|2,50315|2) - should avoid this long anchor, maybe 00:49:828 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18433057/3f44

00:59:197 (59197|1,59280|2,59364|1,59447|2,59530|0,59614|2) - This pattern could be reworked, its a bit weird.

01:04:648 - I guess here should be double as previous was doubled 00:59:315 (59315|0,59315|1) at this vibe of guitar melody

01:07:315 - ^

01:19:697 (79697|2,79863|2,80030|2,80197|2,80363|2) - This anchor is kinda for this part and feels a bit uncomfortable.

01:21:530 (81530|1,81613|3,81697|0,81697|1) - Could rearrange these notes so that the same jump doesn't come twice, as it feels left-hand biased.

01:26:696 - 01:28:863 WOO JUMPTRILL WEE WOO BREBRRRRRR YIPPEE

01:39:196 (99196|2,99280|3,99363|2,99363|0,99363|1) - Probably should move these notes around a bit to remove the 4-long anchor on the third column.

02:07:981 (127981|0,128147|0,128314|0) - rather nitpick, may put this on right hand for balance as previous was on left hand?

02:09:363 (129363|1,129446|0,129613|1,129696|0,129863|1,129946|0,130113|1,130196|0) - huh?

02:12:696 (132696|3,132696|2,132863|2,133030|3,133030|2,133196|3,133363|2,133363|3,133530|2,133696|3,133696|2,133863|3,134030|3,134030|2,134196|2,134363|3,134363|2) - :D?

02:19:363 (139363|3,139863|2) - I'm assuming these two notes are here just to keep the flow? (that'd be perfectly fine, but wanna make sure). Just pointing out bcs they do not have any percussion onto them

02:44:613 (164613|1,164696|2,164696|3,164863|1,164863|0,165030|2,165030|3,165030|1,165280|1,165363|2,165363|3,165530|1,165530|0,165696|1,165696|2,165696|3) - Repeated pattern, would suggest changing

02:53:647 - to make similar motion as 02:48:314 (168314|0,168481|0,168647|1,168647|0,168814|1,168981|1)

might do somthing like -> 02:53:397 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18433091/3755

02:54:030 (174030|1,174030|0,174113|2,174196|3,174196|0,174280|1,174280|2,174363|3,174363|0) - This pattern should maybe be layered the same way as this: 02:48:696 (168696|1,168696|0,168780|2,168863|3,168863|1,168946|2,169030|3,169030|0,169030|1) - As they sound identical

02:56:530 (176530|0,176696|0,176863|0,177030|0,177196|0,177363|0,177530|0,177696|0) - Unusually long anchor in this part, moving 02:56:863 (176863|0) - to the second column would fix the problem.

03:23:613 (203613|1,203780|1) - Same stuff as #3529435, wanna make sure these are for flow as there's no percussion here

04:02:647 (242647|1,242647|2) - here and here 04:02:980 (242980|2,242980|0) can be expressed as single coz the sound seems still fading in

04:05:418 (245418|0,245418|1) - Looks like this should be on the 1/8 rather than the 1/6

04:07:313 (247313|1) - I think based on later pattern, it worth double? see 04:08:647 (248647|3,248647|0)

and maybe can split this jack 04:11:147 (251147|1,251147|2,251313|1,251313|2) as it appears to be the only jack on triplets-doublets pattern at this section

04:19:779 (259779|2) - No kick here

04:32:112 (272112|0,272196|3,272279|0,272446|2,272446|3) - Looks like you got the snaps wrong here, it should be all on the 1/3's (which also means you have one unneeded note)

04:34:196 (274196|2,274362|2,274529|2,274696|2,274862|2,275029|2,275196|2,275362|2,275529|2) - could move some of the single notes in this anchor to not make it quite as long as it is.

04:49:362 - Whats the point of having the doubles be offbeat during this phrase until 04:52:029? It's not something you do anywhere else and contradicts the drum structure, I assume it's not intentional and just a lil mistake done while charting?

04:58:696 - You can't double this with an additional note on col.2 without much issue, it won't affect gameplay

05:14:147 (314147|2) - minor thing to move this on col 4 maybe? to avoid anchor if it's not intended

05:34:862 - kick is a bit subtle but still noticeable here, may wanna add a single

06:17:863 (377863|2) - Can delete this, no percussion in here

06:20:647 - I think here should be double? loud guitar + percussion? idk if quenlla has mention it before coz different timestamp

06:25:696 - percussion here is somewhat noticeable so may wanna add a note

07:36:612 (456612|2,456737|2) - May be unexpectedly tricky to play, probably worth moving first note to col.4

07:40:696 (460696|1,461112|2,461112|3) - Snap to the 1/3

07:42:738 (462738|1) - A bit better on the preceding 1/8

07:42:738 (462738|1) - Missing a lot of singles for kicks in this section (for reference, there is one kick in the drums every 1/1)

08:01:028 - 08:03:695 - 08:06:362 -

08:15:861 (495861|3,495861|0) - Based on your layering schema this should be a single and not a double, as it is in a red line (see 08:16:861 )