00:13:853 (1) delete note and put the spinner beginning here. There should be no sound on that note imo.
00:16:853 slow slider part for sure if this is top dif!
00:30:728 (6,7,8) good hearing! like. But then this should be a triple as well 00:33:915
00:43:290 because you already did it here, you could use a triple pattern more often in this part. Starting from 00:40:853 to 00:46:853
(Again, these are just suggestions)