The Title Track

00:09:870 - you can make this note blue

Make these 2 notes kat for a more comfortable pattern and to make the finisher stand out more: 00:09:870 (8) 00:10:107 (10)

I disagree with #3396992

00:11:844 (17,18) - ctrl+G to swap these two notes so that it better matches the song.

00:13:107 (23,24,25,26) - make this kdkd to better match the guitar, its playing a high note followed by a low note.

Either delete this note: 00:15:791 (34) or make this finisher a regular note to make to make the section more comfortable: 00:15:633 (33)

00:20:291 - Consider deleting the inherited point that you have here as of right now it isn't affecting the map gameplaywise at all

00:28:581 (97,98,99,100) - ctrl+G these notes to better match the vocals that are descending.

00:31:738 - This section its wasting a bit of triplets potential by having only 1/2 notes, consider puting a 3 note 1/4 pattern arround 00:32:370 and 00:32:844 -

00:34:660, 00:34:817 : Can consider ctrl+G these notes to move the color change to be on-beat, since I think rhythm is a bit dense and the off-beat color change makes it a little hard.

Can also consider changing 00:35:370 to k and 00:35:528 to D. This will reduce the color changes which makes it a bit more comfortable and I think better represents the vocal rhythm.

00:40:423-00:40:581 : Maybe change this to a kkD instead of kkK, since the same-colored finisher makes this quite hard to play for Oni.

00:40:896 - This pattern its so simple and yet sooo good, Amazing work!

00:44:844 (186,187) - these notes can just be kat finishers instead

00:46:107 (190) - delete note to give some rest after finisher and to emphasize the finisher a bit more

00:47:212 : Can consider changing this note to d, to emphasize the vocals + crash cymbal at 00:47:370.

00:50:212 - 7 notes is kinda much for a oni, so you can just make the "burst" have 5 notes instead

00:59:212 (259) - make this a don since the finisher that comes after is a kat

i feel like 01:01:107 (4,5,6,7,8) - can be changed into anything else that's not a mono kkkkk, the drums support mapping otherwise (like kkddk?)
01:03:633 (21,22,23,24,25) - same, kkkdd doesnt really play that well so consider changing to something like kkddd
same for 2nd half

01:03:317 (19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27) - you can make this a ddd kkkkd instead

01:06:633 (44,48,58,62) - these specific notes can be changed to be red instead

01:22:896
01:27:948
01:33:001
01:38:054 #3399797

01:24:791-01:25:107: Maybe consider changing these patterns to "kdk", to represent the descending guitar pitch at 01:25:423-01:25:738. This could help add some variety to this section, which feels a little repetitive currently.

If you like this suggestion, also apply it to 01:29:844-01:30:160 and 01:34:896-01:35:212.

01:33:475 (186) - I suggest making this a don finisher to go along with the previous finisher

01:39:949 - you can remove this slider and replace it with some other notes

consdier adding notes at 01:42:633 - 01:52:738 - to represent the dragged vocal, the kiai sections are also nicer with more continuous mapping

01:43:265 - This 1/2 pattern feels a bit too unrepresented. Consider adding a 1/4 triplet in 01:43:738 and 01:44:844

01:44:370 (238) - Delete this note to break up the continuous mapping and provide a little break right before the 1/3 finishers

01:49:975 - consider just deleting this sv, not aesthetic and doesn't do much relating to the music

01:51:239 (281) - Delete this note. A 5 note stream with a finisher at the end is pretty hard for Oni

01:52:581 (282) - Consider changing this note to a d to follow better the lyrics of the song

01:55:317 (299,300,301,302,303) - you can make these notes finishers too

02:01:344 - Consider deleting this inherited point as it has the exact same sv multiplier and volume as the one you last used and thus not changing anything in the map

02:08:212 (355,356) - Consider reversing this notes no improve pattern diversity in this part [Changing them for a kd]

02:09:476 (361,362) - Similarily to #3394518 reversing this notes would improve this section a lot. Consider changing them to a kd

consider moving the sv at 02:16:502 - to 02:16:660 - to create a sudden drop effect after the last note, makes it more aesthetic by reducing that overlap

02:20:054-02:20:686: Can consider changing this pattern to "kkd d" to represent the chord change at 02:20:370 and add some variation.