Fuantei na Kamisama (TV Size)

00:03:394 (4,5) -
00:03:586 (5,1) - wrong spacing
it feels unplayable
https://live.staticflickr.com/65535/52315644153_03636c7e47_o.jpg try this

00:05:317 (1) - wrong spacing even if it's a strong sound for me it's spaced bad
you can map basically everything here just don't mess up the spacing
https://live.staticflickr.com/65535/52315652353_aea7742a77_o.jpg
ik placements suck but it's not the case the idea is that you don't have these inadequate jumps at the first part (2.44ds)

00:06:471 (4,5) - the spacing here should be larger imo. The vocal gets really intense, but the spacing decreases compared to everything else (like even 00:07:432 (6,7) has larger spacing)

00:06:855 (1,2,3,4,5) - Pienso que aca deberia ir un slider en vez de un burst pq hay mas notas de las que deberia

00:11:086 (5,1) - Improve this pattern coz it doesn't make emphasis with the spacing

00:13:202 - how about mappinng the drum here? the drum there sounds bit too noticeable to just skip it with a spinner. and you mapped it here 00:16:086 (1,2) - so i think it would be cool

00:16:08 (1,2) - here you can sound a clear 1/2 sound which you emphasised
00:17:048 (5,6) - here's the same pattern 1/2 but sound is not the same which is weird and wrong
https://live.staticflickr.com/65535/52315725183_2f4183ce60_o.jpg

00:18:586 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - overmap, wrong rhythm / https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/909147844450070538/1013207071283490836/86d818ea39d5816c.PNG

00:23:009 (4,5,6) - instead of mapping this as jumps, maybe map as 1/4 similar to 00:21:471 (4,5,6,7,8) - this would give this section a more consistent feel with the constant bursts, and would contrast from the jumps starting on 00:23:778 (1) -

00:24:644 (2,5) - Don't really hear sounds from the song on these notes
So instead I'd recommend changing 1 & 4 to kick sliders (similar to the ones there) and add some spacing for emphasis

00:26:471 (4,5,2) - don't overlap these

00:30:990 (4) - 00:33:682 (3) - i dont think you really need these overmaps in the calm section. its probably better to remove those and leave 1/4 stuff for more intense parts

00:36:855 (2,3,1) - blanket this better

00:37:625 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - looks visually poor
so the other patterns
00:42:625 (2,3,4,5,6,7) -
00:44:355 (4,5,6,7,8) -

00:40:702 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this whole chain feels clumped because all the objects just revolve around in circle. you can definitely spread those out in the playfield more. this kinda related to #3285093

00:43:778 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - wrong rhythm here, you can remap it
https://live.staticflickr.com/65535/52315839429_5550eb37c4_o.jpg try create and idea and emphasise something you really need to emphasise
00:37:625 (1,2,3,4) - 00:39:932 (3,4,5,6) -
00:48:009 (6,7) - ?
00:48:971 (4,5) - ?
https://live.staticflickr.com/65535/52314619917_5b6385b908_o.jpg
I see someone is modding it already so I really don't want to say same things

00:49:739 (5,1) - pickup not good here - you have clockwise burst 00:49:355 (1,2,3,4,5), then a drop to an anticlockwise slider 00:49:932 (1)

00:51:278 (9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - these kind of patterns just go back to where they were and that kinnd of not good tbh https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18126679/a592. you can probable move 00:53:009 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - to something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18126678/1f1a so the whole thing isnt stuck inn that small square

00:56:086 (1,2,3) - If you're mapping vocals here the vocals feel better if hitting these points
https://gyazo.com/0edcc4c5dccb34a67fe2ed0755e75b5b

excess circle: 00:56:855 - 00:57:048 and try adding a 1/1 slider to highlight the vocals --> here: 00:56:663 / https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/909147844450070538/1013207990247096350/e4fc7233472e33fc.PNG

00:57:240 (4,5) & 00:58:778 (4) - should use the same pattern
Also consider kick slider + new combo to indicate vocals? https://gyazo.com/da902c7a626e226957d72cf9ebe0aab9

00:58:202 - same #3281368

00:59:163 - 01:03:778 personally, i don't think constant 1/2 jumps fit here. The length of this jump section is longer than in the kiai and the spacing is even almost the same as the kiai. For this section, there are pretty noticeable switches at 01:00:702 - 01:01:663 - 01:03:009 . I think maybe the use of some 1/2 sliders is needed to give emphasis to the jumps.

01:02:817 (5,6) - would stack this to give that slowdown before the cursor speeds up again to hit the build-up jump 01:02:817 (5,6,7,8,9)

In the final Kiai some of the jump sizes should be switch, for instance: 01:08:586 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - is just representing drums as the vocals decrease in volume (so should decrease in size if anything)

01:12:625 (1,2,3,4,5) - reduce the size just a bit, climax is around the corner:
01:14:548 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This would be a great time to emphasize the strings hits with large jumps
https://gyazo.com/645138ba992ed1e4310c1af976e02eae
Remove the triple, emphasize the pair of string strikes

01:12:625 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - messy jumps - it doesn't always mean that buildup/suspense before climax = jumps + ignore everything else in song. plus, the music did not emphasize the percussion here

01:15:990 - missing circle / 01:15:894 (9,10,1) - it's triple / https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/909147844450070538/1013210090150563850/a53451c74acc4f76.PNG

01:16:855 (4,6) - why not copy and paste this 2 sliders instead of making a new one? you can click ctrl R to rotate a selected piece

01:18:394 (2,3,4,5) - I'd reduce the size of the jumps here as it's not that active (comparatively)
01:20:702 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Increase the jump size as this is the peak of the vocals