Pinky Hook (TV Size)

00:00:976 (3,4,5,6,7) - i suggest making this 5 degree angles and not 45

00:03:065 I'd like to suggest a rhythm like this which covers both the whole 1/6 rhythm and the change on the pitch of the sound
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17672400/f249

00:03:381 (6) - the hit window after this short repeating slider is too small for a hard diff, I would suggest either removing a reverse arrow or just changing it to a ⅓ repeat slider since the ⅙ can be confusing anyway.

00:04:160 I'd like to suggest another rhythm change here which both covers the 1/6 pianos you've mapped incorrectly as 1/4s and flows well

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17672427/6669
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17672430/d23c

00:04:699 (3) - too long for 1/4 beat

00:10:729 consider turning this to a slider and make it feel nice to play

example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17672436/1a8e

00:11:268 (1,2,3) - rhythm shouldn't be like this, maybe try something like https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/698073447053525023/971718010215735306/unknown.png
to fix the current one
this should be active 00:11:597

00:14:452 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - nice one

00:14:553 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - visual spacing too close

00:18:602 (2,3,3,4) - you should probably stack these

00:26:378 (5,6,1) - shoud fix overlapping

00:37:225 (6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - a e s t h e t i c

I'll suggest you to make 00:43:138 (1,2) - curved and 00:44:014 (1) - straight instead, which is the reverse of what you did :))

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17672472/be41

00:43:239 (5,6) - slider shapes are off

00:45:867 (1) - make this 2 different sliders

00:53:641 (2) - make this a little less intense of a turn

00:54:517 (4) - move up for better flow

00:56:816 (1,2,3) - i don't know why you broke the pattern here, it made sense so you should probably keep it

01:02:728 (7) - nc? dunno this feels like a new combo
01:03:166 (1) - also don't start nc here, 01:03:385 (2) - start it here

01:02:729 (1,2,3,4) - i would make this a triple ending in a 1/4 slider or 2 different 1/4 sliders

01:05:693 (8,9,1) - sounds like a triple to me imo not sure

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17672504/e86e

01:07:327 (3,4,1,2) - spacing doesn't match up

01:13:020 (6,1,2,3) - blanket this

01:17:396 (5,6,1) - Increase the spacing of these triples a bit so its not read as ¼ . Since a lot of ¼ rhythm uses the same “barely overlapping” ¼ th spacing (ie. 01:08:527 (2,3,4) - ) its unintuitive to have ⅓ look almost exactly the same. Maybe change it to something like https://imgur.com/6TFyIru .

01:20:364 (2) - this should end at 01:20:729 instead, (1/6)
(I'm not sure I might be deaf)

01:21:009 (1,2,3,4,5) - This rhythm is very unintuitive to play on a hard diff since the downbeat is expressed with passive rhythm but then transitions to a 4 note stream into ¼ sliders. Introducing this kind of gameplay element (quads) this late into the map (and at a mid-intensity part) seems very unintuitive and likely to trip up any hard diff players. I would suggest changing the rhythm to something like https://imgur.com/hYP8ama to avoid any unjustified diff spikes or new gameplay elements.

01:25:620 I'll suggest you to use a rhythm like this here since it covers the two loud drums on 01:25:948.

example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17672845/8db4