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Title : ディアブレイブ (Dear Brave) (TV Size)
Artist : 鹿乃 (Kano)
Source : ヘヴィーオブジェクト (Heavy Object)

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please add tag 'esia' for fast search

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okay

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pogs

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kano <3

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you should remove bg4.jpg
unused file

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i just deleted it actually, try to redownload?

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ok

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Marked as resolved by Konpaku Sariel

Disqualifying on request to remove the Shokyuu diff.

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sans

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a

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Dear Brave Kano

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https://youtu.be/vyKYjX4rdU8
watch my awesome piano

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K a n o

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01:18:462 - ~ 01:21:015 - I don't think the tension is strong as tense as the first kiai.
I wonder what the intention was to use Kiai in this part.

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If you don't have any special intentions, I recommend you delete it.

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This kiai was supposed to be a contrast after calm part, so i prefer to keep it. Will leave this open for other opinion.

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Agree with Konpaku here. Inserting kiais for a clam part due to contrast is kinda relectant and not really work I would say. Plus the intensity doesn't increase a lot there, making this part kiai is quite misleading in my opinion.

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okay, so im decided to extend the kiai at 00:58:037 - to 01:18:462 - and remove the kiai that Sariel provided.

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sorry for reopen, but i need to know if you guys okay with the current kiai ;w;

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Reopened by [-E S I A-]

I personally think kiai should end up here 01:13:356.
It is clear from the sound of the drum that the tension at the back of the part has dropped.

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yup

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Plus you decreased the density after it, right?

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true, reduced kiai duration as Sariel said.

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01:26:717 - and add redline for barline and onbeat
and don't forget to add greenline too

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Reopened by Konpaku Sariel

yes

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bvrae daer

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This song is not a cover, so utaite (歌い手) in tags isn't make sense.

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removed

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Marked as resolved by [-E S I A-]

Since the volume of the mp3 is lower than usual maps, the hitsounds currently is a bit too loud and covering the song. Consider lowering all the volumes in the map by at least 10%.

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lowered by 10%

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bg3 is quite big comparing with other bgs, you could try this one out:
https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/709366576448798750/975854440881987634/bg3.jpg

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ok

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If you put the green line directly above the note, there is a possibility that the volume change will not be applied properly.
for example, lets see this 00:17:186 -
If you hit this note even 1ms earlier, the volume change does not apply.

Therefore, when changing the volume, it is recommended to put the green line in the front of the target note.

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moved all green line (except some kiais green line) to -20 ms

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cool
and you can add green lines like 00:57:997 - and 01:13:316 - here for accurate volume change

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Reopened by Konpaku Sariel

done

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01:21:015 - 01:22:386 - 01:26:338 - The speed change in the part where the BPM has been changed is not smooth.

For example, In Muzu, Oni, 01:20:377 - ~ 01:21:015 - 0.99->0.98->0.97->0.96->0.93085
(because 175/188 = 0.9308...)
And the intention at low difficulties is not known exactly, but if you do not want to change the speed, you should add a green line to there.

Therefore, it is recommended to make the SV change as follows.

In Kantan, Futsuu, if you don't want to change the speed,
01:21:015 - 1.0742857142857142857142857142857
01:22:386 - 1.1257485029940119760479041916168
01:26:338 - 1.2129032258064516129032258064516

In Muzukashii, Oni
01:21:015 - 1.0205714285714285714285714285714 (188/175 x 0.95)

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Reopened by Konpaku Sariel

and you should add greenline in front of red line as 1/8 or 20ms for smooth volume change

And personally, if you need to change the volume to 50%, I think you should change it from here 01:23:733 - .

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i hope it's fixed now, i'm not close this for now, if its already good i'll resolve :3

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Red line initializes SV to 1.0

In Muzukashii and Oni,
01:26:338 - As you can see by playing it yourself, the speed suddenly decreases in this part.
01:23:823 - ~ 01:26:725 - If your intention is to maintain speed, 01:26:338 - the green line should be added here with a rate of bpm.

01:26:338 - 1.0838709677419354838709677419355 (168/155)

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How about now?

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seems good :D

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Marked as resolved by Konpaku Sariel

There are several parts where the use of big notes is inconsistent.

00:27:398 - 00:32:505 - 01:10:803 - 01:15:909 - There are cymbals here, but no big notes are used.
But in some places it was used.
01:18:462 - In particular, this note and the above note were used in some places and not in some places even though the sound volume was the same.

01:21:015 - 01:22:386 - 01:26:725 - The volume here is very small, so I think the big note is too much.

https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/847422032206495748/970463176334393354/bandicam_2022-05-02_08-13-58-794.jpg
01:03:143 - Please check the consistency between difficulties.

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should be good now

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and suggestions about big note usage
00:12:398 - 00:13:356 - 00:15:111 - 00:16:069 - These parts have cymbals so I think it's worth putting in big notes.
01:11:281 - 01:12:079 - ^

but it's not that important lol

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Reopened by Konpaku Sariel

oke

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00:12:877 - 00:15:590 - btw these notes don't have cymbals so if your intention was to emphasize cymbals, please check this
if you tried to emphasize melody then don't care about this

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Reopened by Konpaku Sariel

i tried to emphasize the melody on this section.

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https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/847422032206495748/970442084433666048/bandicam_2022-05-02_06-49-52-211.jpg
00:36:335 - ~ 00:37:611 - Please make sure the mapping logic.
When looking at the beat of the note, I think the sound to be expressed is the same.
Therefore, I think the pattern should also be the same or similar.

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fixed

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https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/847422032206495748/971957924350021712/bandicam_2022-05-06_11-13-22-305.jpg
01:12:718 - ~ 01:15:909 - Please check this part too.

01:13:037 - Considering the expression method at the difficulty below Futsuu, I think this note should be k.
If my guess is correct, I think you have a greater weight to express vocals than drums.
Therefore, if you change this note to k, all of the vocals come to k.

01:13:994 - As above, considering the expression method at the difficulty below, and considering that there is a snare, I think k should be used.

01:14:313 - Considering the change in the melody of the vocals, I think it should be k because the pitch of these two part (01:14:313 - ,01:14:473 - ) does not change.
And by doing this, dkd can be prevented from being repeatedly used.
Repeating patterns is not a bad thing in all cases, but it is not recommended to use patterns repeatedly when the song's development is clearly different.
And there is a possibility of causing boredom.

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Reopened by Konpaku Sariel

i hope it's fine now

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01:22:386 - Compared to the piano chords and the hitsound sound, the hitsound sound seems to be coming out slower than other parts.
01:21:015 - I recommend changing this red line to bpm176.

If you apply this, don't forget to resnap all notes in that part (01:22:300 - ~ 01:26:725 - )
and move all red,green lines and check the SV at 01:21:015 - here for smooth SV changes. (#3056211/8278400)

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And i slightly recommend 01:22:043 - moving this note to 1/16 forth for accurate vocal's rhythm.

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done

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01:26:725 - pitch is higher than 01:26:338 - so k
kudosu thx ^_^

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yes ^_^

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For Kantan ~ Oni, 00:42:398 - I recommend changing this note to d.
If you look at the previous section, I think you followed the melody as a whole, and if that's right, I think this note is lower than here 00:42:718 - , and it's the same as here 00:41:920 - , so it should be d.

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done

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We need more Kano >_<

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will do this later

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a

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not changed ;;;;
try using mp3 file from this mapset -> https://osu.ppy.sh/beatmapsets/1709733#osu/3493583

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Reopened by Konpaku Sariel

hmm that's weird, i'm pretty sure i already overwrite the mp3s from that mapset, maybe try to redownload?

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redled
please check spectrogram
http://spek.cc/

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Did you use a different app for the spec? because the spec from the link you provided and the spec from the picture are completely different.

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yes i'm using Sonic Visualiser but i think it works same thing

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Audio seems a bit quiet compared with the current ranked one, but i think its fine, changed mp3.
Spec : https://imgur.com/S5DeffN
And please tell me if the audio is already changed after you redownload, so i can resolve :3

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good

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Marked as resolved by Konpaku Sariel

01:12:011 - ~ 01:12:969 - the changes of volume in each diffs are different
make sure the volume usage logic

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will do this later

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a

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01:25:951 - enable "Omit first bar line" because the barline on screen is not onbeat

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ok

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Good luck with the map

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currently map volume not representing as the volume is just flat in beginning of the song could use following volume
00:01:480 - 60%
00:06:426 - 80%
00:16:799 - 70%
00:27:011 - 75%
00:42:331 - 60%
00:47:437 - 80%
00:57:650 - 85% or 90%

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Added

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hypeeee

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hi

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h

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overall still needs some hard works and efforts, masih banyak bagian-bagian yang gk konsisten dari keseluruhan difficult jadi good luck untuk kedepannya~

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jangan lupa mod ku di pencet tombol like nya ya biar masuk kudos nya ke diriku :")

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siap~

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hell yea

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