My Sweet Maiden (TV Size)

00:00:155 - remove one of the green lines here, there's two

00:00:155 (1,2,3,4,5) - These should be 1/6 rhythm because the melody rises on 1/6 beats rather than 1/8 beats.

Also if you apply the above, heres the rhythm and an example of where you can put the pattern: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17722565/7aac

the last circle on there can be stacked with 00:01:599 (4) - this sliderhead for a bit cleaner visual.

00:01:599 (6) - should be a wave slider??
https://i.imgur.com/R49E5m4.png

00:01:599 (4) - this slider feels really weird because it skips the vocal completely, to fix this, you could add a circle here and cut the slider 1/1 and have the slider start 00:01:893 - here. therefore you can have the vocal sound followed properly.

Example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17722607/11ac

after you do this, 00:03:069 (6) - I believe you can remove this because the sliderbody does not include any sound at all which I think feels really empty. After you remove it, 00:01:893 (5) - you can make a reverse for this to follow the vocals more efficiently.

00:03:069 (2) - Circle slider yeah??

00:04:246 (3) - You could make this a wave slider

00:04:246 (6) - this slider also lacks the current vocal support overall. I'd say going with the same rhythm as #3006409 this one would help IMO.

Example (not visually): https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17722617/fd27

00:07:775 (5) - wave slider again

00:07:775 (8) - sliderend should end at white tick

00:11:010 (3,4,5) - remove this and
00:11:010 (3) - add a slider here, should end at 00:11:451 (5)

00:11:304 (4,5) - there is nothing going on in the song and i think having this much spacing is really overwhelming. maybe you can nerf it?

00:13:363 (6) - stack at 00:13:216 (5)

00:14:098 (2) - ctrl j
dont know about the placements but my suggestion is x 131 y 228 (where the slider should start)

00:18:657 - would make this section like this instead https://prnt.sc/NiYOETc-7yEi

00:18:804 (6) - this should be 1/4-beat slider then move 00:19:098 (1) to the white tick behind it

00:21:304 (3) - would make this a 3/4 instead and replace the circles and slider on 00:21:745 - like https://prnt.sc/KauUWjeg0Wkd

00:26:010 (1,2,1,2) - a bit of nerf could be applied on these because i think the gap really feels too strong overall when comparing to the overall difficulty in the section.

00:30:715 (9,1,2) - this rhythm def feels too spammy cuz it doesnt follow any vocal or something and the density feels too much, to fix this, maybe you can simply the rhythm a bit? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17722630/6f3d

00:30:715 (9) - also nc this for downbeat

00:32:480 - there are vocals on the white lines here, so i'd prefer if you had the rhythm like https://prnt.sc/E7mgIHl1oFaT , starts on 00:32:333 -

00:33:657 (6,7) - i'd say switch (ctrl+g) the rhythm between objects for this one as well because you follow vocals mainly and it gets really confusing here when you have slider starting in emptiness.

00:34:759 (5) - there isnt any sound here, i think you should remove this note.

00:35:201 - also could add a note here since u already mapped the burst

00:35:127 - would continue the burst here since covering it up with a 1/2 doesn't go well

00:35:274 - 00:37:774 - i'd say u can nerf this a bit cuz right now it feels really overwhelming when compared to the song's intensity.

00:37:701 - also u shld add a note here cuz seems like u follow the instrument similarly in 00:37:259 - here.

00:35:421 (2,3,4) - can switch the rhythm as well for this one. Reason being 00:36:009 - you have a vocal thats unsupported here. 00:35:568 - but you have a sliderend landing here. So basically switching the rhythms will solve both of these issues

00:37:774 (1) - 2nd red anchor at x 193 y 280

00:40:127 (3) - i'd say u can put this far far away cuz it has a strong instrument landing and right now it feels really underwhelming imo

00:41:157 (4) - fix wave slider
https://i.imgur.com/R49E5m4.png

00:42:848 (6) - u shld remove this note cuz there arent any sounds.

00:42:921 (7,1) - i think u can turn this into 1/2 slider for a better rhythm overall for vocal follow.

00:43:657 (4,5,6) - Also you do the same rhythm here so i don't see a reason why you shouldnt.

00:44:098 (6) - unsnapped

00:44:539 (9) - replace with slider
slider should end at 00:44:686 (1)

00:44:833 (10) - nc after that

00:47:259 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i think you should remove these notes or map them in 1/6 because it sounds like a disaster and TOO intense when comparing to the song.

00:47:308 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this piano+vocal rhythm is all actually 1/3 snap, not off beat 1/12.

00:49:000 (6) - AIMod said this slider is not snapped, you may wanna give it a check

00:49:539 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - cool pattern for your 2nd map

00:49:539 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - good patterning

00:51:304 (1) - extend this into a 1/1

00:51:304 (5) - u can make a new combo for this if u wanna

00:51:304 (5) - instead of an 1/1 slider, i think it's better to split into 2 3/4 sliders like this, it will emphasize the vocal better https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/715200680905670666/964524613533065246/unknown.png

00:51:892 (2) - NC since it's the 1st down beat

00:51:892 (2) - clearly this should be a slider
Slider should end at 00:52:039
also nc as xKongou said

00:53:656 (3,4) - ctrl+g rhythm wld be better for vocals overall

00:56:598 (1) - slider

00:57:774 (8,9,10) - think u can remove 00:57:921 (9,10) - and make a 1/1 slider for variety in rhythm. right now it feels really spammy etc.

00:58:068 (10,1) - maybe put the 00:58:215 (1) circle right at the end of the slider 00:58:068 (10) cuz the spacing is off, or make it a triple altogether

00:58:215 (1) - slider should start at 00:58:362

00:59:245 (5) - stack at 00:59:098 (4)
00:59:686 (8) - stack at 00:59:539 (7)

00:59:833 (1) - burst
01:00:127 (4) - stack at 00:59:833 (1)

01:00:127 (4) - maybe turn this into 2 circles, 01:00:421 (5,6) - then ctrl+g this rhythm for a better rhythm choice

01:00:421 (5) - slider

01:01:230 (1) - i think you should not have the sliderend in a really important beat because it feels REALLY REALLY UNDERWHELMING. I'd say 01:01:230 - add a circle here, 01:01:304 - move your slider here.

after you do this, try to support some vocals in 01:01:304 - 01:05:127 - like here in 00:51:892 - this part.

01:01:304 (1) - extend your slider to the red tick at 01:01:451

01:04:245 (5) - slider???

01:04:686 (1) - place at 01:04:539
also this 01:04:980 (2) - place it here 01:04:833

01:11:745 (3) - nc

01:15:127 (3) - make this a 2 circles, then make 01:14:980 (1,2,3,4,5) a whole stream

01:18:657 (6) - sliderrrrrrrrrr
should end at 01:19:098

01:27:627 (7) - nc