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00:15:582 (15582|2) - 这个note的重音应该和00:15:693 (15693|3) - 的音高是一样的，可以考虑4col叠

00:15:693 (15693|1,15693|3) - i think that this timing should have both notes sticking together for a better representation of that piano sound, how about this? :: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/11012423

00:21:026 (21026|2,21138|1,21249|2,21360|1,21471|2,21582|1,21693|2,21804|1,21915|2,22026|1,22138|2,22249|1) - like we talked about irc, let's just remove it and put and LN from 00:21:693 - to 00:22:360 - for the piano that's emphasized here

00:22:360 - All the 3 diffs layering here is literally the same. I personally believe that the hardest diff can use a huge difference in the layering here for the piano echo like this https://puu.sh/AsuVQ/f204ebdd3c.png so it could gives off different feeling of emphasize towards the overall diff in this specific section instead of being the same 1 note

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00:22:471 and 00:22:582 , from these 2 timestamps, i guess you can add 2 notes here as you can hear a gentle grace note here, you can leave it if you do not want to, just purely a suggestion :)

00:22:915 - 00:24:915 - add note for follow piano pitch?

00:23:693 i like how you follow the notes' pitches from here. But from here you can hear the piano is gradually getting louder and heavier, so i think you can add 1 more note to each of these timestamps to emphasize the volume of the piano starting from 00:23:693, then to 00:24:360 , 00:25:026 , 00:25:693 , 00:26:360 . and to avoid clashing with CS' diff, imo it should be a "little" bit harder :3

00:26:360 - This bell melody gives off a distinct feeling of melody pretty far from the piano. It's way too empty here I would say since the song starts to build up in volume and background sounds start to kick in from this point to the 1st chorus. I would do something like this https://puu.sh/Asv2h/54d8ced520.png to layer the bell and fill up the gap for the build ups

00:29:249 - could you change the direction here so its not too much the same direction that goes for the whole section

00:38:026 - ups add note here, kick snare

00:38:138 (38138|2,38138|1) - these 2 here, i am pretty sure that you are following the vocal here, like what you did here for 00:37:915 (37915|0,37915|3,37915|2) - and 00:38:360 (38360|1,38360|0,38360|3) - , adding 1 more note to there would be better for the consistency~

suggest to make it double, 00:41:360 - 00:46:693 - since you made a double in this area for a drum kick 00:42:138 - and here 00:44:026 - and also it can make the player can distinguish the sound from the tap

00:47:249 (47249|3,47471|3,47693|3,47915|3,48138|3,48360|3,48582|3,48804|3) - not cool anchor

00:51:804 (51804|0,51804|3) - make [23] the sound repeats from 00:51:471 (51471|0,51471|3,51582|1,51582|2) - and also [23] followed from 00:51:582 (51582|2,51582|1) -

00:53:360 (53360|3,53360|0,53471|0,53471|3) - would change it to [34] here so i would have this weird balance that it currently does

01:03:693 (63693|0,63804|0,63915|1,64026|0,64138|0,64249|1) - Could use some re-arrangement because this one is rly left hand heavy. Tried to play it without problem but maybe it would hassle to the player of 3* caliber. 01:03:915 (63915|1) - just move this to the |3| will do <3

01:03:915 (63915|1) - i personally think it goes better in column 3 for hand balance and a better flow of pattern

01:07:582 (67582|0,67693|0,67804|0) - i don't like how this column repeats 3 consecutive times, how about moving 01:07:582 (67582|0) - this to column 3 and 01:07:693 (67693|2) - this to column 2?

01:09:693 - this could be more than just 135 bpm jumptrill

http://puu.sh/ALCsW/21d740c13c.jpg

01:10:360 (70360|2) - i don't think this timing deserves to have 3 notes, the sound doesn't support it. Moreover, i don't quite agree about column 3 having a sudden column repetition there, if it were to have them it should be in these 01:09:693 (69693|0,69804|1,69915|0,70026|1,70138|0,70249|1) -

01:21:026 for this part i think it has to be a little bit more intense as the song is gradually building up to its climax, i'd suggest adding 1/4 notes for the piano starting from here. Some notes may have to be double according to the pitch of the piano notes.

01:21:360 - add a note for drum bass?

assumed that you have followed the suggestion that i gave above, 01:24:026 these notes can be changed into LNs to have a clear difference from the 1/2 from before, which is of higher pitches, and the LNs for the lower pitched piano notes. I'd suggest something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10999891 but you can try to rearrange the pattern to your liking~

01:25:471 (85471|2) - I dont think there is actually bass piano here. If there is, it's pretty inaudible compared to the latter ones. I would suggest to remove it

01:29:360 (89360|0) - hold on this is reeeeeeeeeealy ambiguous to be worth noticed. i dont heard any low piano like any other places you did

01:29:693 (89693|0,89915|0) - i think there were just more than a two pianos

http://puu.sh/ALDKm/bd26a84ae3.jpg

01:31:471 (91471|1,91582|2) - sound of violin is better presented with sliders

01:44:249 - just one thing actually. should this be separated LN?

01:50:471 - add a note for violin

01:52:471 (112471|1,112582|2,112582|3,112693|0,112804|1,112804|2) - 建议https://puu.sh/AtgYa/3d53ae3ae3.jpg （其实主要是最后三个note你看看跟pitch要怎么排

01:52:804 (112804|2) - made into a slider to cover the sound of a wave of hat?

01:55:804 (115804|2,115915|1,116026|3,116138|2) - change these into minijack to complement with the piano sound. Probably something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10999926

01:56:582 - you follow the piano, add one note at 01:56:582 - in col 1 the sound of the piano still sounded rather audible and not too small to ignore