00:17:792 (17792|2,17792|1,17792|0) - this is preference but this sounds like it should be an open hand rather than this closed [123] imo - ctrl+j 00:17:714 (17714|3,17792|2) - and then rearrange 00:18:105 (18105|3,18105|1,18105|0,18261|1,18261|3,18261|0) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16835013/759c fixes it but honestly i wouldn't blame u if u just left it as is
00:32:011 (32011|2) - pretty sure this is 👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻
recommend keeping this movement though if you remove it 00:31:855 (31855|1,31933|0,32089|0,32167|2) -
00:32:167 (32167|3,32323|3,32480|3,32636|3,32792|3,32948|3,33105|3) - Too many note stacks...
I think it would be better to express it a little differently like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17328966/89e5
00:37:584 (37584|3,37688|0,37792|2,37896|0,38000|2) - you used js for tom rolls like this before (00:14:980 - 00:27:480 - ), i'm not sure if the snap difference justifies the density so i'd suggest just keeping them js also eg.https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16835026/12e2
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00:56:073 (56073|2,56230|1) -
00:56:542 (56542|1,56698|2) -
why are all of these not stacked D: (see 00:20:605 (20605|3,20605|2,20605|0,20761|0,20761|3,20761|2) - for reference)