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00:17:113 (17113|3) - inconsistent with 00:14:664 -

also top diff doesnt have a note there so maybe delete

01:45:276 (105276|3) - ^

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Fixed!

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00:41:297 - imo with the amount of varied movement the right hand gets, the left hand could use some more "motion" kinda hard to put it to words but https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16954988/0b3f

instead of anchoring the loud echo clap i think a motion like this could make for an interesting emphasis

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Hmm, I've wanted it to be symmetrical with the right hand so that it makes it much easier to read and play, but I think I sort of understand what you mean. Having the notes be put on col2 and 4 makes the notes feel like they represent the synth in the accompaniment better so I've applied your suggestion. But yeah, just wanted to say why I made it symmetrical in the first place. I think your suggestion is good and wouldn't make it toooo much harder.

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00:45:123 - I missed this one, vocal is actually in this snap (1/4) and not on 1/1

in the case of autumn diff, i think the usage is ok because of the pitch shift of the "ni" also it's a waste of a nice looking pattern if you had to remove the note there.

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00:50:480 - add 3? kinda makes sense here when 00:51:399 - is also a double (with an additional sound being the synth-y sound that's not part of the layering)

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Decided to remove 00:51:399 (51399|2) - instead.

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00:55:589 (55589|7,55742|4,55895|7,56048|2) - I'm not completely sure on the layering choice; 00:54:518 (54518|6,54824|8) - suggest vocals, but these suggest something other than vocals - I can hear the kick drum but maybe consider sticking to one of the two? and in case you do keep the kick, you missed it at 00:58:957 - and 00:56:508 - and 01:00:487 - and 01:01:406 - which I'd say are from the same section where the new phrase begins at 01:02:477 -

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The reason why not every single sound there it's supposedly representing is added is to make it a little easier. I made it so that 1/4 patterns on a single hand are avoided. Notes are added at points that make the pattern/sound representation easier to digest. If players are looking for full representation, then they should play the hardest difficulty!

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01:13:286 - could prolly add for vocal

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Added

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01:14:263 - maybe add the note here as an ascending stair here for the "na" in "anata" since you didn't shy away from it at 01:11:661 (71661|9,71814|8,71967|7,72120|6) -

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01:24:059 - same here

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Sure! I've added the extra notes

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add at 01:23:541 - which has a kick (dont forget to add W sample)

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Added!

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I wasn't so sure myself but seeing as you've pointed it out, I think it's safe to say that snapping is correct. I think the pattern doesn't feel as fun to play though so I think I'll rearrange the notes to accommodate the new snapping. Thanks for the catch.

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hmmm? I feel otherwise on this one. played the top diff and it seems obvious to me that the snapping is 1/3.

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Reopened by [Ping]
  1. If you put it at 25% - you can hear that the vocals are more on point with the 1/3 snap than 1/4

  2. I tried changing (in the Autum diff) to 1/3 for that part. I'd say personally it's smoother and easier to play, but might just be me.

Anyhow, I think this really should be 1/3 and not 1/4.

Tho idk how you would go about representing the drums (particular 01:32:878 and the likes are in 1/4 but the vocals are in 1/3) - maybe some notes on left hand for them (in Autumn), or just omitting them might be viable?

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Tho idk how you would go about representing the drums (particular 01:32:878 and the likes are in 1/4 but the vocals are in 1/3) - maybe some notes on left hand for them (in Autumn), or just omitting them might be viable?

Well previously when it was on 1/3 snapping, having each hand represent each voice made the left hand able to play 1/2, 1/4 (percussion) while right hand played 1/3s (vocals), which felt pretty reasonable to me. So representing the drums and whatnot won't be an issue.

Anyway, I'm pretty unsure about this now and will leave it open. I'll see what the BNs have to say about it. I'm leaning toward 1/3 since that's what it was initially, but I want play it safe. Thanks though, Ping!

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01:31:807 - to 01:38:541 - i will definitely stand on 1/3 side it's quite weird to play.

actually it's not really focusing on drums but layering does something for vocal so it's more make sense to get with 1/3

normal, hard and autumn diffs should be considered

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Changed back to 1/3 snaps. Thanks for the feedback guys :)

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01:43:899 - yeah adding here is strongly advised for the piano though jacking is not necessary, maybe rearrange the flow or something considering that 01:46:348 - has a note

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Added a note for the piano there. However I just want to get your opinion on applying that same logic to the earlier parts of the song such as 00:13:286 , etc? Should I add those same piano notes there or should I leave it as the end is sort of supposed to be the more challenging part?

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After looking and playtesting it a bunch, I think I'm only going to apply the end and leave the start as is. I think it makes the progression feel much better!

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yeah that progression is 100% ok

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01:51:246 - add 6? would be pretty nice cause the chart has plenty use of 1/4ths already

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Added a note there but rearranged so that it's alternating between hands for the percussion drum kick stuff. I personally think it plays better and feels better that way.

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