Seimeisen

00:06:279 - perhaps this part could be revert to opposite side due to the new iteretion of tune. making it same as always also makes hand frozen.

00:10:426 (10426|2) - this being on 3 make it quite cluttered here in the 3rd column with 00:10:161 (10161|2,10426|2,10867|2) - . So I suggest moving to 4 so it is spread out more and also respecting the pitch a little bit better

00:14:926 (14926|0) - anyways this should be jack 3 note, it's similar to 00:12:102 - saw more depth the part, easier where the jack disappeared, such 00:17:573 - or you make them similar for comfortability.

00:23:926 (23926|2) - 00:26:043 ~ 00:27:102의 휘슬라인들처럼 같은 자리인 2번으로 옮기는 게 좋지 않나 싶어요.

when I played I noticed 00:25:337 (25337|0,25514|1,25690|0,25867|1,26043|0,26220|1,26396|0) - being on the left hand. I would suggest rearranging here as I don't think you intentionally did this pattern to emphasize the sounds here.

00:27:455 ~ 00:27:808, 00:30:279 ~ 00:30:631 - 이 파트 중에 두 부분만 트릴형식이라 조금 어색하게 느꼈네요. 다른 드럼사운드 표현한 방식 그대로 가져가는게 저는 더 좋다고 생각합니다.

00:31:690 - rather than a static jump jacks here. You could play some movement with the piano sound. Particularly, 00:32:043 (32043|1,32043|3,32396|2,32396|0) - could be made into [34] and [12] respectively and then voila your one-hand double now shows piano and player might be able to noticed this (unconsciously) through the jacks movement.

00:35:352 (35352|1) - 1/8 is a bit vague it seems, it more like 1/8 higher. for safety, try to remove instead. this also impacted to 00:36:764 (36764|1) - and similar.

00:37:955 - 00:39:367 - 00:43:602 - forgot notes for squeezing sounds probably?

00:42:984 - 의도하신게 아니라면 노트가 하나 빠진 것 같네요.

00:45:808 (45808|3)-I think this LN is a little awkward In the case of other 1/4 LNs, the vocal sound is consistent with LN like 00:46:867 (46867|1,47043|2)- I expressed it as an enemy, but only this part was in a different format. How about making it consistent by changing it to a normal note?

00:48:631 (48631|0,48720|1,48808|0,48896|1,48984|0,49161|1,49249|0,49337|1,49426|0,49514|1) - making it way with a hand is more difficult than tbh. suggest to make similar opposite to 00:45:808 -
00:51:808 - if you focus the triple for the snareclap, 00:52:161 - 00:52:867 - 00:53:573 - 00:54:279 - should be mapped as triple as well. or probably its for the preperation, try to remove the triple and make it as double chord jack instead.

00:54:367 - before starting the drum stream, there is a 1/4 drum sound that is quite emphasized in this part as well. I think it’s a little awkward to ignore. It's not an appropriate example, but it can be similar to 01:07:337 (67337|3,67337|0,67337|1,67426|2,67514|1,67514|3,67690|3,67690|2,67690|0,67867|2,67867|1,68043|1,68043|0,68131|2,68131|3,68220|0,68220|1,68308|2) - here

00:55:867 (55867|1,56043|1,56220|1) - the vocal pitch is not similar, perhaps revert to another col from comfortability.

00:56:484 - I know the intention, but isn't it more suitable for the double due to the structure of the drum?

00:59:308 (59308|1)-I understand the intention to divide the vocal into 1/4, but I think it's a little awkward because it's only used in this part rather than using the mapping that divides the vocal as a whole. 01:02:131-It is recommended to remove it because vocals do not exist clearly. Instead, it is recommended to use a part that clearly has sound in the background, such as 01:00:720 -.

01:07:779 (67779|1,67955|3)-This part also doesn't have a clear sound, so it is inappropriate to use it as a note. By removing it, you can maintain the overall consistency of mapping only clear sounds. suggest: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16517996/a22a

01:10:602 (70602|3)-This part also clearly doesn't sound strong enough to use a minijack, but I think it's a bit strange to be used. It's a bit weird in the expression of the song and I recommend removing it.

01:13:426 (73426|0,73514|1) - 01:16:249 (76249|3,76337|2) - ctrl+g to avoid unnecesary jack.

01:13:426 (73426|0)-When solving the other modding for the minijack, in the end, only this part remains, but using only this part as a minijack is a bit awkward, and there is already enough difficulty through the LN complex pattern. By adjusting the pattern, you can adjust the overall balance of the dif. suggest: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16518005/c737

01:15:543 - I can see that the second kiai part is also using 1/4 snap, so I think it is suitable for use here as well. It is consistent with the same music structure 01:04:249 - here