Diamond no Jundo (TV Size)

00:03:068 - I think you can start here, after all, this is the beginning of a piece of music, not a sudden appearance

00:03:624 - 00:05:105 - 00:06:615 - They seem to work in double time, because there's an obvious piano here that makes them stand out.

00:06:245 (6245|1) - 00:11:676 (11676|3) - unsnapped objects
You may check AI mod

00:07:355 (7355|3,8126|1,8866|2) - can change into LN follow piano, it will be more interesting

00:10:365 (10365|3) - 귀찮네 걍 한글로 쓸게요
이거 2로 보내는거 어떠세요?
00:09:254 (9254|2,9254|3) - 34 00:09:809 (9809|1,9809|2) - 23
이게 붙어있는 롱노트가 아래에서 작은 구조를 이루고 있는데 여기도 맞춰주면 좋을듯해요
그리고 1/1 잭은 00:09:994 (9994|0,10179|3) - 이 두친구가 잭으로 구성되는데 PR 에서 훨씬 좋겠죠? 칙칙이가 반복되니..
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/15577796/bff8 ex

00:10:365 (10365|0,11676|3,11868|2,12062|1) - how about doing like it: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/15683981/2422
to follow bas

00:27:160 (27160|3,27160|2,27254|3) - 이런 패턴 무루무님의 아담 맵에서 뭐 올드한 패턴이다 라는이유로 디퀄 먹은 경력이 있는데 참고해두시는게 좋을거같기도 해요 그리고 아마 수정하게 되신다면 이런식으로
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/15577802/899e
드럼 스네어 3개로 강조, 잭 제거

00:27:254 (27254|0) - Cut in half

00:29:316 (29316|2,29691|1) - i don't think this LNs is good to follow the guitar sounds, because they sounds different. maybe you should follow the vocals in 00:29:504 - and 00:29:879 - like you did before.

same with 00:32:316 -

00:32:316 (32316|2,32316|3) - why you double here? fix like 00:29:316 (29316|2) -

00:38:129 (38129|2,38129|1,38316|3,38316|2) - 이거 두개 같은 선에 배치하는거 어떻게 생각하세요? 마지막이라가지고 보컬이 좀 흐려지면서 드럼 악기가 많이 강조되는데 여기에 베이스 둥 둥 있거든요 주관적으로 먼가 느낌 사는듯? 그런느낌? 좋은느낌?

00:38:879 - I noticed that you put this snare quad, seems in this song you only put snare triple, so I guess this also triple?

For the part start at 00:39:254 I feel it's a bit under-mapped.

Since you've already introduced such 4 col pattern at 00:37:754 (37754|0,37941|3,37941|1,37941|2) -

I feel doubles are no longer that reasonable for here 00:39:254 (I would say... Use triples.)
Also 00:42:254 Could shorten this LN 00:41:879 (41879|0) - And create a shield pattern.

Similar reason as what I've said at #2771672
00:40:566 00:43:566 Could consider using quads.

00:40:941 (40941|2,41129|2,41316|2) - the jack here is meaningless

00:47:504 - Da bo lu ' w ' maybe?

00:54:160 miss a note. can do like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/15684027/c2bc

00:58:754 --> 01:00:254 can place LNs according to pitch. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/15684034/ed7e

01:01:566 - i think this section could be added 1 LN for vocal because it's kinda strange to let it quad and make a 1/1 break imo

01:07:379 (67379|1) - what is this 1/4 LN for, u only do in some speical vocal stack like 00:52:941 (52941|0) - , i think it should be 1/2 long like u do in 00:52:379 (52379|2) -

01:08:597 (68597|3) - 이거 지우는게 낫지않을까요?
맵의 전체적인 구조 자체가 1/2 로 이루어져있어요 그 중간중간에 1/4 드럼을 트릴로 강조하는 방식이구요
근데 여기는 드럼 자체는 01:08:691 - 여기서부터 강조되는 느낌이 커서 맵 전체적으로 보았을때 01:08:597 - 여기다가 노트 넣으신건 전체 구조에서 좀 상반되는 느낌이에요 여기에다가 넣으면 다른데 넣을데가 좀 많이 생기거든요

01:14:691 - It can be double ; w ;

01:17:035 (77035|3,77129|3) - The only 1/4 stack in this diff.
Tbh, you don't have to forcing 'kick = doubles snare = triples'.
For special places, you could definitely 'make some differences' to make pattern more smooth.
Well, it's fine to move 01:17:035 (77035|3) - to 01:16:941 for this case.
Triple to emphasize the vocals in this part like 01:16:191 01:16:379 01:16:566

Really minor one.
Since you've used quad at 01:18:254 the ending point of the chorus.
I feel 01:22:379 could also consider to use quad for emphasizing.

Also maybe every end point of the kiai could also be emphasize, I mean 01:01:566 01:09:066 01:15:066 These three.

01:19:707 - 요기 1/8 있어요 하이라이트에서 쓰시던데 혹시나 놓치셧을까봥