00:06:678 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - VS 00:08:160 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - would be cool to use either higher spacing for the latter of lower spacing for the former, to create contrast/represent the intensity difference. I would personally nerf the former.
00:09:641 (5,6,7,8) - ignored 1/4s,map them actively to be consistent with 00:08:160 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) -
try using the convert slider to stream option to create more aesthetically pleasing streams like in 00:14:456 (https://streamable.com/efwv2q)
00:20:011 (1,2,3,4,5) - no need to use new combo as they play like the previous combo. If you want a NC, I would recommend doing a movement change like this for example http://prntscr.com/ujg9ko
00:21:308 (3,3,3,3) - if you do ctrl + g it will be more interesting to look and play. https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/646083183749627925/728699980285607936/screenshot1114.jpg
00:26:678 (1) - this random spacing increase is kind of uncomfy and not consistent with what you do with the other streams surrounding it for example here you dont do it and on many others as well you don't do it so i recommend making it exactly like 00:24:826 (13) spacing
00:39:086 (1) - to 00:50:382 (1) - strongly recommended to tune down the spacing because this section is supposed to be a very calm part of the song.
00:48:900 (1) - delete this note because it doesnt follow anything contrary to 00:49:086 (2,3,4,5) - which follow the piano.
01:11:123 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - this rhythm choice doesnt work well because the song doesnt drop in intensity. Use more active rhythms to keep the momentum.
01:11:123 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i think it would be significantly more representative if these repeat sliders started on the main melody, such that the player is actively clicking on the melody instead of some drums.
The sliders should start on these timestamps:
01:11:123 01:11:400 01:11:678 01:11:956 01:12:234 01:12:511 01:12:789 01:13:067
which should end up looking smth like this https://gyazo.com/6a4316921ead08117c180e2d60ab1003
(cursor is on 01:12:141)
01:49:641 (1) - to 02:01:493 (1) - 2 things:
you can still tune down the spacing because this is a calm section.(like here 01:55:567 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - )
you can nerf the density to improve the contrast,because a constant 1/2 section is still intense
01:51:678 (9,10) - can be a 1/1 slider
01:53:159 (5) - this note can be removed.
01:49:641 (1) - to 02:01:493 (1) - Nerfed the spacing (again hehe) and modified this part (i will need testplays to improve this section)
01:51:678 (9,10) - I will keep this for now
01:53:159 (5) - Note removed
02:15:197 (2) - the tail of this slider has a strong sound that probably should be clickable
02:15:937 (4) - 02:27:049 (2) - 02:21:123 (2) - 02:21:863 (4) - 02:34:826 (3) - too
02:15:197 (2) - Now it's clickable
02:15:937 (4) - Clickable
02:27:049 (2) - I have my doubts about this
02:21:123 (2) -
02:21:863 (4) -
02:34:826 (3) -
02:31:123 - Note added!
Pd: Si me ha servido tu mod, y si, te dejaré like :D
02:17:789 (1,2,3,4) -
02:29:641 (1,2,3,4) -
i would make the rythm like https://prnt.sc/ufj1qb
02:17:789 (1,2,3,4) -
02:29:641 (1,2,3,4) -
both changed, in 02:29:641 (1,2,3,4) - checking twice i noticed how that slider ruined the rythm that i was following.
02:35:937 (6) - In my opinion it's better with slider but maybe two notes works, i will need some test plays for this
02:41:492 (9) - I would start the pattern of 02:41:863 (1) - there as it is where the song changes its pitch
rythm example
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/15529501/0664
02:45:474 (12) - this one feels weird, make it like the one at 02:44:086 (13) - so it does not confuse the player while playing that stream part (put a circle at 02:45:474 and move 02:45:474 (12) - to 02:45:567 and make it only reversed 4 times)