00:02:940 (2940|0,2940|3) - , 00:05:190 (5190|3,5190|4) - , 00:05:340 (5340|1,5340|0) - , 00:07:740 (7740|3,7740|4) - make these into single notes instead of 2 note chords to make it consistent with 00:00:540 (540|3) -
OR make 00:00:540 (540|3) - into a 2 note chord (ln+single note).
00:03:390 - quite awkward that this string is ignored, you can add a LN that ends at 00:03:690 - and remove 00:03:540 (3540|4) -
as requested in forum
00:03:540 (3540|4) - maybe feel like you may neglect the faint 1/4 sound here and simplify it into something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/15198109/bae1 ?
Good point. I did something a bit different with note placement https://i.imgur.com/2SSeOpu.png
00:10:140 (10140|3) - i think it's better to stop here 00:10:440 and add note for C here 00:10:740 since u always double for clap
00:10:140 (10140|1) - how about move it to col 1? It sound similar with 00:09:390 (9390|0,9540|0) - , and make a similar gimmick would make it better, imo
00:10:140 (10140|1) - how about move it to col 1? It sound similar with 00:09:390 (9390|0,9540|0) - , and make a similar gimmick would make it better, imo
00:25:140 (25140|3,25590|3,25740|1,26340|3,26490|1) - imo, it feels weird to play it this way. I suggest to change it to 5|4|2|5|2
00:27:990 (27990|3,28290|4) - thought you may shift this one column to the left (3&4)? so that the ln-note combination matches with 00:28:890 (28890|4,28890|3) -
its more of a visual and note placement thing
00:29:340 - i can get the idea of this part, but to be consistent, there are more kicks throughout this part, so putting double for all of them would be too hard for Normal. you can try double for the main melody only, like you did in the main diff, and rearrange the main diff with other patterns.
00:30:540 (30540|1) - 00:35:340 (35340|0) - 00:37:740 (37740|3) - delete these, continuing 1/2 endlessly feels boring imo
i'd suggest deleting 00:30:540 (30540|3) and where this rhythm repeats.
places the emphasis more on the kicks rather than the weewoowoo and breaks up the 1/2 a bit more
00:33:090 (33090|2,33240|1,33390|0) - 1-2-3 instead of 3-2-1 to give the big sound at 00:33:090 a little more significance
00:35:940 (35940|4) - move to col 5 to make it more connected in w the stair, can delete 00:35:340 (35340|0)
00:36:990 (36990|1,37140|2,37290|1) - this can be a bit awkward especially on a normal diff, might want to shift it across to the right side. can delete 00:37:740 (37740|3)
00:38:340 (38340|2,38490|0,38640|1,38790|2,38940|3) - would prefer this as just a normal full stair, including that first note in better.
Ur right but I'd rather cut it short like 00:44:940 (44940|1) - etc to end on a clickable note. I'd rather keep this simple in this diff. Although if I get feedback for that change I don't mind doing this
00:51:390 (51390|1,51540|2,51690|3) - It's probably better to avoid this particular group being a stair-like pattern (the others here are fine). Since 00:51:390 (51390|1,51690|3) go to the melody and 00:51:540 (51540|2) to the snare, using this kind of 2->3->4 misleads the player into thinking it'll be the same instrument or type of instrument.
01:05:340 - add a note in column 5, and a note in column 3 at 01:10:140? Might be missing something here, but you also doubled these earlier on (00:55:740 (55740|0,55740|3) - and 01:00:540 (60540|1,60540|4) - )
01:07:140 (67140|2) - how about move it to col 1 or 2? to create better right-to-left hand play?
01:10:740 (70740|4) - Make this a 2 note chord so it's consistent with 01:11:490 (71490|3,71490|1) - and 01:11:940 (71940|3,71940|1) - , etc.
01:15:240 (75240|4) - just noticed while modding Silhouette diff, should be ending on 01:15:540 as well
01:24:240 (84240|3,84390|0) - Can make this a jack instead to add more tension (since doubling them would overkill it a bit) Perhaps moving 01:24:390 (84390|0) - to 4 is enough.
01:26:940 (86940|2,87015|0,87090|3) - something like 2-4-2 with this might make it a bit neater. two hand trill of index is a little more comfy
01:34:740 (94740|2) - uses 1 note on snare while 01:33:690 (93690|4,93690|2) has 2. i'd suggest using 2 notes for 01:34:740 (94740|2) and then deleting 01:35:040 (95040|0) -
since the sound at 01:35:040 (95040|0) repeats at basically every 1/2 removing parts where there is no other significant sound there as well may be better
01:37:740 (97740|4) - remove this? you may also add 1 note 01:37:890 - for snare & hi-hat, unlike 01:42:540 (102540|0) -
since 01:38:340 (98340|3) - sound far more intense than 01:38:040 (98040|1,98190|2) - , i prefer to make a column gap between them. So, move it to col 5 would be nice
01:52:740 (112740|3,112740|1) - thought you may shift this one column to the right (4&5)? and change the other 2 double like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/15198139/d413 ?
01:55:740 (115740|0) - don't forget to move this to avoid overlap, if you apply my suggestion
01:58:890 - add another note to make a same gimmick with 01:56:940 (116940|3,116940|4,117090|2,117240|1) - ?
The organ's definitely important to this song overall and the section prior was basically just a drum solo so I could kinda map doubles easily. But idk about having too many triples in a normal. I could make 02:02:940 - just this one a triple because of the finish sound as well but the other I'd leave as single note and LN for the organ. It sorta plays like a double anyway
02:08:790 (128790|1,128940|2,129090|0,129390|1,129540|0) - a bit too heavy on the left hand here, may want to balance it a bit better across both
02:30:990 (150990|4,150990|1,151140|0) - snare is on the white tick, may want to move that double up there
02:31:740 to 02:46:140 - Ranking Guidelines for normal diffs state that long 1/2 streams should have a 1/1 break in between where natural - probably need to break this stream up a little. Could achieve that by removing 02:35:490 (155490|2) - and 02:42:690 (162690|1) - my idea being that they're the most faint synth sounds
02:48:990 - add a note in column 3 to capture the repitition of this sound? 02:48:690 (168690|2) -
02:56:190 - also here if you've accepted my suggestion above :P seems like the only two places where you don't have this sound mapped
03:11:940 (191940|4) - Don't think this goes to anything you are consistently layering, so probably wanna delete this.
So this one I also did here 03:04:740 (184740|4) - and the idea for this whole section 03:00:540 - is to use doubles to compliment the synth chord but two LNs spamming here seems like too much to me. So I'll keep as is for consistency