A Yo'ster Sunset

00:02:940 (2940|0,2940|3) - , 00:05:190 (5190|3,5190|4) - , 00:05:340 (5340|1,5340|0) - , 00:07:740 (7740|3,7740|4) - make these into single notes instead of 2 note chords to make it consistent with 00:00:540 (540|3) -
OR make 00:00:540 (540|3) - into a 2 note chord (ln+single note).

00:03:390 - quite awkward that this string is ignored, you can add a LN that ends at 00:03:690 - and remove 00:03:540 (3540|4) -

as requested in forum
00:03:540 (3540|4) - maybe feel like you may neglect the faint 1/4 sound here and simplify it into something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/15198109/bae1 ?

in the map are missing sonds (Finish) 00:09:240 00:09:840 00:10:295 00:10:590 00:11:045 00:11:340 00:11:797 00:12:390 00:12:690 00:12:990 00:13:440 etc. same in the other diff

00:10:140 (10140|3) - i think it's better to stop here 00:10:440 and add note for C here 00:10:740 since u always double for clap

00:10:140 (10140|1) - how about move it to col 1? It sound similar with 00:09:390 (9390|0,9540|0) - , and make a similar gimmick would make it better, imo

00:10:140 (10140|1) - how about move it to col 1? It sound similar with 00:09:390 (9390|0,9540|0) - , and make a similar gimmick would make it better, imo

00:10:890 (10890|2) - ln this til 00:11:190 maybe? it feels better imo

00:11:490 (11490|3,11790|3,12090|3,12540|3,12840|3,13140|3) - stack like that is too intense for lower diff, try to rearrange this part and add some notes on col 0 (0, 1, 2, 3 ,4)

00:11:790 (11790|3) - maybe u can move one col up here 00:11:940 for C

00:12:840 - add a note to consist with 00:12:540 -

00:22:890 (22890|2,23190|1) - add a note for kick

if you delete 00:24:090 (24090|2) - , you can emphasize 00:24:240 (24240|1,24240|4) -

00:25:140 (25140|3,25590|3,25740|1,26340|3,26490|1) - imo, it feels weird to play it this way. I suggest to change it to 5|4|2|5|2

00:27:990 (27990|3,28290|4) - thought you may shift this one column to the left (3&4)? so that the ln-note combination matches with 00:28:890 (28890|4,28890|3) -
its more of a visual and note placement thing

00:29:340 - i can get the idea of this part, but to be consistent, there are more kicks throughout this part, so putting double for all of them would be too hard for Normal. you can try double for the main melody only, like you did in the main diff, and rearrange the main diff with other patterns.

00:30:540 (30540|1) - 00:35:340 (35340|0) - 00:37:740 (37740|3) - delete these, continuing 1/2 endlessly feels boring imo

00:33:090 (33090|2,33240|1,33390|0) - 1-2-3 instead of 3-2-1 to give the big sound at 00:33:090 a little more significance

00:35:940 (35940|4) - move to col 5 to make it more connected in w the stair, can delete 00:35:340 (35340|0)

00:36:990 (36990|1,37140|2,37290|1) - this can be a bit awkward especially on a normal diff, might want to shift it across to the right side. can delete 00:37:740 (37740|3)

00:38:340 (38340|2,38490|0,38640|1,38790|2,38940|3) - would prefer this as just a normal full stair, including that first note in better.

00:43:740 (43740|3) - this LN should end at 00:44:490 - if it follows the melody

00:44:490 (44490|2) - Should be a LN like 00:01:290 (1290|2)

00:46:740 - instead of adding an additional note, i think this string can be completely ignored

00:51:390 (51390|1,51540|2,51690|3) - It's probably better to avoid this particular group being a stair-like pattern (the others here are fine). Since 00:51:390 (51390|1,51690|3) go to the melody and 00:51:540 (51540|2) to the snare, using this kind of 2->3->4 misleads the player into thinking it'll be the same instrument or type of instrument.

00:58:590 (58590|1,58890|1) - move to right hand cols to avoid overstacking

01:05:340 - add a note in column 5, and a note in column 3 at 01:10:140? Might be missing something here, but you also doubled these earlier on (00:55:740 (55740|0,55740|3) - and 01:00:540 (60540|1,60540|4) - )

01:07:140 (67140|2) - how about move it to col 1 or 2? to create better right-to-left hand play?

01:10:740 (70740|4) - Make this a 2 note chord so it's consistent with 01:11:490 (71490|3,71490|1) - and 01:11:940 (71940|3,71940|1) - , etc.

01:15:240 (75240|4) - just noticed while modding Silhouette diff, should be ending on 01:15:540 as well

01:24:240 (84240|3,84390|0) - Can make this a jack instead to add more tension (since doubling them would overkill it a bit) Perhaps moving 01:24:390 (84390|0) - to 4 is enough.

01:26:940 (86940|2,87015|0,87090|3) - something like 2-4-2 with this might make it a bit neater. two hand trill of index is a little more comfy

01:34:740 (94740|2) - uses 1 note on snare while 01:33:690 (93690|4,93690|2) has 2. i'd suggest using 2 notes for 01:34:740 (94740|2) and then deleting 01:35:040 (95040|0) -

01:37:740 (97740|4) - remove this? you may also add 1 note 01:37:890 - for snare & hi-hat, unlike 01:42:540 (102540|0) -

since 01:38:340 (98340|3) - sound far more intense than 01:38:040 (98040|1,98190|2) - , i prefer to make a column gap between them. So, move it to col 5 would be nice

01:47:940 (107940|4) - move somewhere for better hand balance

01:52:140 (112140|4) - double here instead of the red tick to show that kick

01:52:740 (112740|3,112740|1) - thought you may shift this one column to the right (4&5)? and change the other 2 double like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/15198139/d413 ?
01:55:740 (115740|0) - don't forget to move this to avoid overlap, if you apply my suggestion

01:56:790 - Def missing a note for the kick here. Same at 01:58:590, 02:00:390, 02:02:190.

01:58:890 - add another note to make a same gimmick with 01:56:940 (116940|3,116940|4,117090|2,117240|1) - ?

02:02:940 - going from representing snares with double to having them left as single notes feels a little strange. ik you're mapping the organ(?) part here but since the rhythm on the drums is more or less the same I probs wouldn't neglect it is a much

02:08:790 (128790|1,128940|2,129090|0,129390|1,129540|0) - a bit too heavy on the left hand here, may want to balance it a bit better across both

02:30:990 (150990|4,150990|1,151140|0) - snare is on the white tick, may want to move that double up there

02:31:440 (151440|3,151440|4) - double seems a bit unnecessary here

02:31:740 to 02:46:140 - Ranking Guidelines for normal diffs state that long 1/2 streams should have a 1/1 break in between where natural - probably need to break this stream up a little. Could achieve that by removing 02:35:490 (155490|2) - and 02:42:690 (162690|1) - my idea being that they're the most faint synth sounds

why not delete 02:31:890 (151890|1) - for consistensy?

02:48:990 - add a note in column 3 to capture the repitition of this sound? 02:48:690 (168690|2) -

02:56:190 - also here if you've accepted my suggestion above :P seems like the only two places where you don't have this sound mapped

03:11:940 (191940|4) - Don't think this goes to anything you are consistently layering, so probably wanna delete this.