00:59:601 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - wouldn't it be better to follow the guitar's 3/4 rhythm by patterning this in groups of 3 instead of 2? would also have to change patterning to make 01:00:470 (3,4,1,2,3) - one single pattern/combo, current phrasing seems really weird to me since there's no 1/2 emphasis/instrument playing rn
01:01:340 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - there are definitely drums missing out. I imagine you wanted to make this part a lot less dense.
I personally think you should at least add a note there 01:01:449 - or just make this tbh https://princess-suissie.s-ul.eu/U5y20AKF while maybe this 01:01:884 (1,2,3,4,5) - looking like https://princess-suissie.s-ul.eu/lwsyZfVo
01:02:657 - i'd strongly recommend covering this beat since you already did on 01:01:788 (2) -
01:10:905 (2) - replace this with circles so it's more apparent that guitar gets emphasized since it's the same as 01:10:036 (1,2,3,4,5) - then
03:18:731 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - can u place these only on the left part of the screen cuz the guitar is only audible on the left side
03:31:775 (1,2,3) - the drums are 1/4 here, personally idm the overmapped 1/6 but 1/4 into 1/6 would make the most sense
the pillars of god 03:58:731 (1,2,3,4,5) -
god I always loved this pattern so much
04:35:144 (1) - would be nice to hitsound this at least cuz the spacing is really high and having no feedback is kinda wack