00:00:071 (1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3) - this plays very boring. generally: following the same rhythm is fine. so is following the same types of patterning. but using the exact same patterns more than 2-3 times in a row makes the map play very boring
I suggest you change things up, so sliders arent exactly the same
00:01:129 (3) - It seems kinda random which slider is going to be facing the opposite direction. The third sliders on these notes is a louder piano sound so that should be the slider that faces the opposite direction every time.
00:29:365 (4,5,6,7,1) - unsure about the flow into and of 00:31:129 (1) - here, feels a little too strong
00:45:953 (4) - You have a half beat slider leading into a quarter beat reverse slider. But I don't really see why the reverse slider is there and the tail end of the half beat slider lands on a fairly strong vocal so I think a slider head would be better for it. Here's how I would do it: https://drive.google.com/open?id=1z-7q8LU9oI4YbI7d6SFD-iDl2mXXfmIN
And then same kind of thing on the other parts that use the half beat slider into reverse quarter slider.
01:14:212 (3) - I think that in this kiai a slider here and in his peers look much better than just a note
01:21:600 (4,5) - vocal intensity increases but the stack continues.I think this part could be more representative adding some spacing between 4 and 5.
01:27:423 (1) - same for here, you use ncs to show 1/2 and 1/1 gaps elsewhere so having comboing like this can be confusing to read and inconsistent
01:34:659 (1,2,3,4) - These four notes go from out to in, but the drums in the strong get stronger. So I would recommend making the notes go from in to out so that the increase in spacing matches the increase in the volume of the drums.
01:45:953 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - These drums are very similar to these ones in the song : 01:34:659 (1,2,3,4,1,1,2) I like the triple but you turn these notes: 01:46:659 (1,2) into a slider since that's what you did the last time these drums played. I think it would make it more consistent.
nah no need. 01:35:365 (1) - slider was made to catch a little the vocals, and 01:46:835 (2) - drum is way louder than 01:35:365 (1) -
02:06:423 (1) - would place it with 02:04:306 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - pattern and then 02:06:776 (2) - bottom right corner