00:12:281 - add another note on col 2? Since 00:12:476 (12476|2,12476|1) - had double when they have similar sound
00:32:443 (32443|2,32541|1) - how about swap their column? I think it would be better to emphasizing the sound
00:37:216 - prefer it to be like this to emphasize the sound, but still up to you
00:58:255 i think you could change the pattern of this beat into a 1-4 trill like so: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/14989677/9486 , as you did a 2-3 trill at 00:57:963 and it would be fitting, for that voice sound.