00:16:762 (16762|2,16956|1) - how about swap their column? It feels fits better with the music, imo
works for me since the drum is higher I wanted it to have on 2nd column for a higher pitch
00:24:164 (24164|1) - how about move it to col 4 to make a friendlier pattern?
I think this works well. I dont believe people will have too much struggle playing it
00:29:424 - little suggestion https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/14300527/09c3
would break consistency since on every part similar to the one you mentioned I mirrored the pattern to give more emphasis to vocals
00:35:268 (35268|1,35658|2) - prefer to move it to col 1|2 because the high vocal.
fixed
00:37:411 (37411|1) - you don't wanna move it to col 3 to make it stack with previous notes? I think it will work
I think this works fine. I dont see a reason to move it yknow
00:38:190 - better u make this a stairs too , ikr this was normal diff but it's kinda akward when i play it
sure
00:47:638 - missed a note there
01:00:398 (60398|3) - these LN should start here 01:00:593 - i guess
I used the LN to represent the drum buildup in the song, not the synth