01:03:176 - would remove, you used these patterns before where there are hihats like 00:22:960 - , but here is none so would keep this part 1/4-free, also emphasizes next part which has many drums and 1/4s
The intensity felt different to me, where the first part was higher intensity as the beginning of the kiai, so I made it continuous. In the second part the intensity was lower and closer to the end of the kiai, so I tried to reduce the pattern there.
03:20:202 - this doublet feels a bit random i think? There's no unique sounds/vocals or drum like 03:06:742 - i'd just remove this note to emphasize the vocal better
03:44:120 - 03:44:607 - 03:45:580 - 03:45:904 - imo finisher is a bit too much here cuz the piano isn't really strong to warrant a finisher, would suggest to make this to normal note instead