00:22:412 (2,3,4,5) - change 00:23:139 (4,5) to a slider or something? Having so many stacking before and after the slider
00:39:503 (1,2,3,4) - i think its weird that you switched to intruments right here when before you were mapping to vocals, there's still vocals here so why not follow them?
00:56:775 (1) - imo a 1/2 repeat slider would fit here better to emphasize the vocal on the white tick
01:08:594 (1,2) - Rhythm sounds so wrong here. try going for something similar to 01:20:231 (1,2,3,4) - because not giving any emphasis to 01:09:321 - 01:09:503 - 01:09:685 - is really meh
01:20:231 (1,2,3) - I think a rhythm like this would be better, the slider 01:20:775 (2) - seems odd right now https://imgur.com/eE5Uwkf