00:13:747 (1,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - the transition into 1/4 is pretty disorienting since its such a massive jump in difficulty, how about something like a quint into a repeat first and then then stream instead of just 2 1/4 repeats into the stream?
00:16:582 (1,2) - the angles of these sliders clash, try something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/12779431 which is definitely what it was before you decided to ctrl g 2
00:28:535 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - spacing here feels way too high for how calm the part is... just do DS like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/12779437 lol
overall the backwards slider flow just feels a bit harsh for how calm the song is cuz u need to snap it pretty hard...
00:45:697 (4,5,6,7,8) - back and forth movement definitely does not fit the vocals here, which have a descending scale and not 1/1 emphasis
01:12:675 (2,3,4) - why not make a 3 slider pattern instead of 2 and then 1 randomly jutting out like this
01:20:885 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this jump pattern is more intense than all the other ones tbh, feels unfitting
02:33:741 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - the vocal phrasing repeats here, "boku na-i ushi na-i" so the pattern and rhythm should be the same