00:18:281 - to 00:40:781 - I don't know what you are following this part... Obviously you didn't follow vocal, and didn't follow bass sound (I'm not sure if it's bass sound, I mean the sounds at 00:18:656 - 00:19:031 - 00:19:593 - 00:19:968 - 00:20:343 - ...). If you say you basically follow the drum sound at white line, then why you put so many circles here 00:23:718 (2,3,4) - when you ignore 00:22:968 - 00:23:343 - ? I recommend you to reconsider the rhythm this part.
建议00:53:175 (1) - 00:53:550 (1) - 00:54:112 (1) - 的NC去掉，00:53:737 (2) - 加上。
因为00:52:799 (1,2,1,2,1) - 是一组相似的音，00:53:737 (2) - 是突变点
00:55:800 (1) - 还是觉得在ex难度的kiai放一堆这种1/1折返有点太过松散乏味了，可以尝试这样的3/4，大概会更有活力一点https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/14557378/899f
02:38:718 (6,7,8,9,1) - 考虑一些把02:38:718 (6,7) - 换成3连然后把02:39:093 (8,9) - 换成1/4滑条？因为我看你后面的切指02:39:468 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 都跟了电吉他（诶这个是电吉他吗？乐器分不太清）就67这里没跟，然后你89这里的音不那么明显所以我感觉9这里可以用滑条尾盖过
02:59:175 - 感觉这个音clickable比较好，毕竟是02:59:362 - 强很多的，而且02:59:175 (2) - 放一个加速滑条可以和02:58:800 (1) - 的减速对照。https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/14557356/cc10
如果想抓02:59:362 - 也可以尝试两个1/4滑条
建议删去03:09:206 (7) - ，这样可以同时强调vocal 03:09:112 (6) - 和鼓03:09:300 (1,2,3) - ，不然现在就有些黏在一起含混不清的感觉
03:11:160 (2,3,4,5) - 这边突然间距就拉特别大不太好，建议拿这一组做铺垫跳改小一些，这样后面03:12:285 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 跳出去比较自然