Party Don't Stop

00:01:104 (1104|0,1104|3) - and 00:01:810 (1810|3,1810|0) - as well as 00:06:045 (6045|0,6045|3) - and 00:06:751 (6751|3,6751|0) - : I don't think you should repeat these doubles unless they're repeated in a pattern. Example: 00:01:104 - and 00:01:810 - the two doubles here are repeated but the doubles at 00:03:222 - and 00:03:928 - aren't even though they would line up with each other if you wanted to repeat doubles here.

and the doubles at 00:06:045 - and 00:06:751 - are repeated...but not at the earlier spots of 00:00:398 - and 00:01:104 -

All in all I think it's best not to repeat doubles unless you do it at consistent intervals. Otherwise it makes things feel inconsistent.

00:05:340 - missing double? (kalo bisa col 1)

00:09:928 (9928|2) - Ghost note, there is a sound here but it starts earlier than this spot, instead I think you should map out the sound at 00:09:751 - since you mapped out those sounds before

00:10:814 - sabi di add ini

00:16:987 - Idea for this part, I think it makes for a really pretty pattern! :D
00:17:163 - to 00:19:281 - : https://puu.sh/BHWB3/357b087138.jpg
00:19:457 - to 00:21:222 - : https://puu.sh/BHWCS/ac1d79d30e.jpg

00:21:222 (21222|0) - delete, hard aja cuma 1, masa normal 2?

00:21:928 (21928|0,21928|1) - and 00:22:281 (22281|3,22281|2) - shouldn't be a double imo since 00:22:457 (22457|1) - is a single and they all represent toms. Plus I don't think they deserve as much emphasis as the crash at 00:22:634 (22634|2,22634|0) -

00:23:693 - to 00:31:810 - So there isn't much to go off of in the music but I think it would be a good idea to use different patterns instead of repeating the same 4 note pattern, I think it would spice up the section a bit

00:29:693 move the note here to 1st column so that it would be https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/12023568 (the sound kinda goes in 3/4 time signature, so it is better to represent the sound as 1-2-3-1-2-3-1-2-3...

Then, rearranging the parts after this as follow for balance https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/12023583 , https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/12023596

00:30:402 (30402|1,30755|2,31108|1,31461|2,31814|1,32167|2,32520|1) -
Dunno why you make it long stack, I think those notes have different pitch. Suggest rearrange it by
-> 00:31:108 (31108|1) - move to col 1 (1/2/3/4)
-> 00:31:461 (31461|2) - move to col 4

to maintain consistency , 00:32:869 (32869|1,32869|0) - should be single like this one 00:10:104 (10104|0,10193|1,10281|2) - also 00:33:045 (33045|3) - should be double like this one 00:10:457 (10457|0,10457|1) -

00:33:575 (33575|3,33575|2,33751|1,33928|0,33928|3) -
umm I will put https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/12027538 since 00:33:751 - is pretty heavy and you double 00:33:575 -

00:36:398 (36398|0) - should be on 2 since it's in the same part as 00:34:281 (34281|1,34634|3,34987|1,35340|3,35693|1,36045|3) -

00:40:457 (40457|3) - , 00:41:516 (41516|3) -, and 00:41:516 (41516|3) - I recommend deleting these hihats since not all hihats are mapped out in this section. It'll make the drums and claps stand out more too

00:45:922 (45922|2,46275|2,46628|2) - don't think it's a good idea to have three stacks in a row here, consistently.

00:45:216 ~ 00:50:510 - / 02:04:275 ~ 02:09:569 - when looked at the entirety of the same part, the stacks for the drum and clap sounds were showing stacks of one.

00:45:922 (45922|2,46275|2,46628|2) - so the stack count for this note is inconsistent, and may require some pattern adjustment.

00:55:457 for consistency, clap sound here should be played

00:55:987 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/12023525 like this so that the clap on 00:56:163 can be played

00:59:167 - single kyk e cukup sih, bukan yg climax bgt yg kudu di padetin

01:02:163 (62163|0,62163|1) - Shouldn't be a double since it's a much weaker sound than the drum at 01:01:810 (61810|3,61810|2) -

01:13:457 (73457|3) - delete?

01:13:461 (73461|1) -
Better emphasize the vocal in another hand like you did in 01:01:814 (61814|2,62167|1). So, suggest move that LN to col 4 (1/2/3/4) and move this note 01:13:814 (73814|3) to col 2

01:21:575 (81575|2,81928|1) - knp pada beda sendiri, padahal suara sama?

01:24:398 remove the note on 2nd column for consistency with how you map 01:21:575 and 01:21:928

01:26:163 - suggestion that gets rid of the big anchor on 1:
Part 1: https://puu.sh/BLJxp/30067f8003.jpg
Part 2: https://puu.sh/BLJzt/bdae0eb0ff.jpg

01:30:398 - this section should be a little more pitch relevant. When the synth these LNs represent have pitches that are going down, put them to the left of the LN that came before it, otherwise put them to the right.

01:48:222 (108222|1) - move to 3 for hand balance

01:50:516 - a star is a pattern that is very noticeable visually, I don't think you should use it here if you didn't represent these sounds with stairs elsewhere

01:59:340 (119340|1,119693|1,120045|1) - try not to use a 3 note stack here, it visually looks strange if you don't use it elsewhere, applies to similar spots unless you're using 3 note stacks for a musical reason

02:09:575 (129575|0) - move to 4 for hand balance

02:14:516 (134516|0,134604|1,134693|2,134693|3,134869|0,134869|1) - saran https://puu.sh/BBYKG.png

02:14:516 add a note on 4th column and then remove 02:14:693 (134693|3) - would be much more correct based on consistency and pattern

02:25:369 (145369|2) - 'tis a ghost note

02:26:516 - tambah col 4

02:27:575 (147575|2) - move this to 2nd column to prevent 02:27:222 (147222|2,147575|2,147928|2) -

02:32:516 (152516|3) - delete

02:49:457 an LN is needed for the trumpet thingy. I suggest you rearrange the patterns so you can put it. (actually, changing 4th column note to LN then end it at 02:49:810 is also not a bad idea)

02:49:461 -
Yo, missed a double since you use double here 01:30:402

02:51:575 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/12023671 too much stuffy going on in the left side. Try rearrange some of them to the right side.

following this section you are representing
02:55:457 - should be double and 02:55:810 - 02:56:163 - single

03:06:751 (186751|3) - definitely move to 2 for hand balance