Deep Blue Sky & Pure White Wings

00:00:628 - The offset seems about 10 ms too early.

00:09:741 (35) - to better improve what the map is being mapped to consider moving this note to 00:09:844 - and switching to k to better represent the drums which are prominent here.

00:36:224 (187) - consider moving this note 00:36:120 - here to map better to the snare which is prominent here.

01:03:741 (343) - you can move this to 01:03:948 - here since there's no noise in particular on 01:03:741 - that is being mapped while there is a vocals in the other place.

01:11:810 - This pattern, both here and at 01:25:051 - , 01:28:569 - , 01:34:362 - , and every similar timestamp in each kiai, is not obvious as to what is being mapped to or improvised over. The vocals drop out and there are drums, but the drum pattern is very simple, usually something like k ddk d. I suggest simplifying every one of these patterns to make it more obvious as to what is being followed.

01:22:982 (452,453) - consider changing these to d as they are the same instrument as 01:23:189 (454,455) - .

01:43:258 - this not having a finisher and 02:56:086 - this being one is inconsistent, pls fix.

02:08:706 - this pattern sounds better with the drums as dk kd as the sound at 02:08:913 - is very faint.

02:57:741 - and 03:01:051 - I don't know what this is following, it is very unclear. The drums are not doing anything out of the ordinary, so it is not that. If it is supposed to be mapped to the long note, then it is inconsistent with 03:04:362 - , 03:07:672 - and every other similar long note. I suggest cutting up the stream to match the drums better.

03:11:189 - same king of thing here, this stream isn't representing anything, not a buildup, not the drums, not a help out note, very vague.

03:15:844 (1157,1158) - maybe ctrl g this because all 4 of those hits are the same snare, doesn't make sense to have 1 as a d.

03:16:982 - you can use 1/6 here to represent the guitar if you want.

03:36:638 - is there any reason this section is not mapped to the vocals? It's quite literally the only thing here besides the bass.

03:48:431 (1292,1294) - consider deleting these notes as they do not exist.

03:55:155 - consider making this pattern dkkkkd as there is a 4 hit snare here that you are neglecting to map.

04:08:085 (1432) - consider moving this 04:08:189 - here and making 04:07:982 (1431) - a k instead so it's better mapped to the drums since they're the most interesting and mappable thing in this song.

04:28:051 (1575,1576) - I believe this pattern would fit better to the drums if you make these k's and 04:28:362 (1578,1579) - these d's.

04:32:086 (1603) - I don't think that this note carries enough weight to have a finisher, it would be inconsistent with parts like 04:35:396 - .

04:35:293 - would be nice if this drum was mapped as well.

04:41:913 - I mentioned this earlier but I can't find it, this is inconsistent with 01:43:155 - there being a note here.

04:53:396 - there is a pretty obvious drum here, it would be good if you mapped it.

04:53:396 - consider adding a note here as there is a note here.