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This beatmap wasn't updated since 10 August 2024 so it was graveyarded...
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02:28:398 - missed drumroll?

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02:29:470 - and 02:30:541 - too

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02:31:479 - big drumroll missed, you couldve put an entire stream there

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02:42:461 (283,284,285,286,287,288,289,290,291,292,293,294,295,296,297) - strange pattern choice given that theres nothing happening on blue ticks, a much more conventional pattern couldve been used here instead

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02:44:738 (313,314,315,316,317,318,319,320,321,322,323,324,325,326,327,328,329) - almost hits the vocals but not quite, if you wanna go kat dense you could do kkkdkdkkkdkdkkddk instead, would fit the vocals properly

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02:51:836 - this whole section being calm feels completly wrong, the song doesnt really change much in intensity, you still have drums and melody to map to

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03:08:443 (49) - maybe make this a don instead? would flow better

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03:22:104 (132,133,134,135,136,137,138,139,140,141,142,143,144,145,146,147,148,149,150,151,152,153,154,155,156,157,158,159,160,161,162,163,164,165,166,167,168,169,170,171,172,173,174,175,176,1,2,3,4) - not only does this have kind of a weird dkkd pattern at the very end of the stream, but the very beginning of the stream is very very repetetive

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03:25:318 - also drumroll still continues here

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03:32:818 (71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89) - aside from 03:32:952 (73) - needing to be a kat, this is where you did emphasis with patterns well

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03:34:425 (92) - kind of a strange place to put a slider, you couldve kept going with streams

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03:34:961 (93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121,122,123,124,125,126,127,128,129,130,131,132,133,134,135,136,137,138,139,140,141) - prime example of very very repetetive streams, you should look into some other maps to get inspiration from, steal some patterns that hit similar points of emphasis

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if you do find better less repetetive patterns, i'd continue that previous stream from 03:38:175 - to 03:39:247 -

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03:58:398 - I think you should keep going in the same intensity as before, the vocal being dropped and song slowly ending is already marked well enough with the spinner i think

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04:18:889 (188,189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198,199,200,201,202,203,204,205,206,207,208,209,210,211,212,213,214,215,216,217,218) - this is also well done, changes up pattern a bit to not make it boring to play, but still emphasizes well

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I did all your changes you made me cry with how great the song is turning out I hope a BN sees this shit <3

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