mapped by -Story-
submitted
last updated
This beatmap wasn't updated since 23 February 2025 so it was graveyarded...
New Discussion
Please sign in to post or reply
Discussions
Sort by

for this kiai 06:46:530 - 07:59:673 i think you can do more with the background sounds being used here, particularly after 07:04:816

at this point in the song, mainly the vocals and other background sounds start becoming more intense/prominent.
I think you can take this into consideration and map based on vocals/sounds.

for example, starting from this measure 07:10:530, the vocals get really high pitch until 07:13:959, so you could maybe you could gradually increase the distance of the streams here.
there is plenty of other places you could do this at (I’ll write more on this at some point)

permalink

the new combo on this map is still kind of inconsistent at times.
remember you should new combo every big white tick only, if you need any help you are free to talk to me on discord id love to help.

ex 00:43:200 (5) - should be nced bcuz platter would have too much notes
00:52:800 (4) - same thing ^
nc is also seen as being used frequently here like 06:22:288 (1,2,3,4,1) - should only have nc on 06:22:588 (1) - for visual clarity

permalink

imo i think most of the 1/8 in the main drop of the map 06:46:530 - 07:59:673 are kind of unnecessary.
for example taking 07:02:388 (1,2), this is a lot weaker compared to the 1/8 at 06:55:530 (1,2)

i could see the vision but i feel like these r just mapped for the sake of it being hard, all the sounds i mention r perfectly fine to be just be 1/4

07:08:673 (1,2) -
07:11:530 (1,2) -
07:13:816 (1,2) -
07:22:888 (1,2,3) -
07:24:673 (1,2) -
07:25:245 (4,5) -
07:29:245 (1,2,3,4) -
07:36:673 (1,2) -
07:37:709 (9) -
07:42:816 (3,4) -
07:43:388 (3,4) -
07:47:102 (3,4) -
07:47:530 (1,2,3,4) -
07:49:959 (1,2) -
07:50:423 (2) -
07:54:959 (5,6) -

i may be missing something completely and im ok with listening to other opinions

permalink

00:24:000 - 01:02:400 - i believe some of the sliders in this intro could use more movement to emphasize the slow violin better, most the sliders could be stood still on and it doesn't really represent the violin

permalink

if possible i think making sv multiplier a little higher (0.85x perhaps) will help with this effect if you feel the same way; this goes for all slow sections in the map

permalink

06:08:188 - 06:27:388 - i know it seems boring but i would consider restructuring this for less hdashes, i think you can do something like 1 or 2 hdashes per measure, especially hdashes on the big white tick because those are the most important sounds here imo
section needs to be reconstructed to accommodate for the slow section, because the hdash spam doesn't fit very well

permalink

to add on, i think the streams at 06:27:388 - 06:36:988 are cool and all, but you switch from mapping the drums to now the vocals.
personally, i would stick to mapping the drums still, but in this section you can add a lot more hdashes (like what you currently have for the first section) as it's building up to the next section

permalink

06:46:530 - 07:59:673 holy shit
08:14:209 - 08:48:209
my jaw dropped

permalink

here are some important tags
featured artist fa osu! original electronic instrumental orchestral dubstep tearout hardcore neurofunk

source should be osu!mania 7K World Cup 2025

permalink

remember to add combo colors

permalink
/