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I'd recommend adding a circle on 00:19:435, to keep consistency with 00:12:079.

And catch piano, instrument that you mapped every single time throughout the part.

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As for 3/2 RC break, you could just delete 00:21:274 (34) -, it feels natural.

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Consider moving 00:42:653 (87,88) - 1/1 forwards, in order to catch the snare, like you did starting on 00:45:872.

There are currently no sounds on current circle's position.

As you're following snares, you could also represent the one on 00:44:952 by mapping it.

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I'd recommend moving 00:47:251 - to 00:48:630.

It seems like you are mapping the drums starting on 00:47:251 - in order to follow the growing up intensity.

Omitting the (kinda noticeable) one on 00:48:630 - breaks with the continuity of what you're trying to do.

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By the way, you're only following guitars and drums throughout this part, so consider deleting the circle on 00:49:780 that is on a vocal.

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Would you like adding a circle on 00:48:860 - in order to keep consistent with the guitar mapped on 00:45:182 ?

Omitting it feels unnatural.

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I'd recommend adding a circle on 01:03:113, to catch the guitar + vocal, as you followed vocals on 01:04:722 (51,52,53) -.

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Same could be done on 02:05:642 -.

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Consider adding a circle on 01:18:286, in order to remain consistent with 01:10:929 & 01:14:607.

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The sound on 01:39:090 - is so intense that it could be mapped better than omitted.

So, consider a triplet ddd on 01:38:975.

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Consider moving 01:53:458 (65) - 1/2 forwards, in order to catch the strong drum accompanied with melody.

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Consider moving 02:36:217 (182) - 1/2 forwards, in order to catch the guitar.

It is quite intense, and it seems like that you are following the guitar on 02:36:906.

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You could move 02:42:194 (196) - & 02:45:872 (212) - 1/2 forwards to catch the guitar which is quite prominent & the main melody.

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I'd recommend CTRLG + G on 02:54:837 (242,243) -, since there is no drum on 02:54:837 (242) -.

Doing so would mark the breakup between 02:53:918 (238,239,240,241) -, drums represented by dons, and 02:54:837 (242) -.

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02:56:217 - a ddk 1/4 followed by a 10/2 pattern is way too hard for a muzukashii, even at 130 bpm.

By the way, it's the only instance where you are using something else than ddd or kkk, and that's quite disturbing to play.

Consider changing it to kkk.

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