00:20:065 (6) - i would change that into a circle since you have a 6 object chain here 00:18:940 (4,5,6,1,2,3)
also to maintain consistent with your rhythm choice on patterns like 00:28:877 (8,9) - 00:22:502 (5,6) -
00:23:440 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ik u wanna follow vocals but this is kinda a lot of 1/2 considering how calm the verse is, smt like this seems more appropriate for a verse imo
01:21:565 (4) - mbe remove circle, the way this chain is structured feels pretty similar to 01:23:440 (1,2,3,4,5) - which is very different intensity