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00:06:336 (1,1,1,1) - could space a bit more because the intensity supports it

it helps to prepare players very early from its more spaced variations such as 00:57:159 - 01:08:453 - etc

and also helps balance the diff out by a bit since most of the kick slider jumps are at the chorus

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I don't think that's a very good idea.
I think this is good for the beginning.

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00:07:042 (1) - this really stands out, why not just make it like 00:46:571 (1) -

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move a little to the right

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oh gosh, this mod was supposed to go to avant garde diff. i apologize, but glad i pointed something out that you thought could be moved more?

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00:15:512 (1,2,1) - couldn't really feel the impact or weight of the cymbals here because of the mild spacing

maybe you can space 00:15:512 (1,2) - a bit more like what you did at 01:17:630 (1,2) - ?
Although maybe not to the same degree since you want the latter to be more impactful as 01:17:630 - had a layer of trumpets backing it up

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second one has an emphasized vocal, so I think it's distinguishable.

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00:22:747 (2,3) - 00:23:277 (4,5) - think ctrl+g these individually works better for rhythm?

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no

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00:30:689 (3,4) - this would work better as 1/2 slider since there's nothing really 00:30:865 - happening here in music

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00:32:100 (6,7) - same here, consistent with 00:29:277 (4) - and no need for such density in calm section

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no

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since you wanted to catch the drums here

00:32:806 - hitnormal
00:32:894 (2) - hitnormal

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I'm following the vocals, but the drums are really small sound. i think little noisy if add those hs.

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00:38:100 - circle here and 00:38:100 (1) - make 1/2 on red tick works better since you won't be ignoring this 00:38:277 - vocal

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Since it's a slow part, I think it's okay to simplify it to fit the melody.

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00:45:159 (1,2) - kinda felt overdone because there's a noticeable drop in the tension but the sv remained stagnant

would help if the sv of 00:45:512 (2) - is lowered so that the contrast of intensity between 00:45:159 (1,2) - is more apparent

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I think it is effective to keep sv to make a gap with 00:46:042 (1,2).

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00:45:512 (2) - any reason for this? could all be under 00:45:159 (1) -

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make a gap with 00:44:983 (5,1) -

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00:46:218 (2) - felt like there's no reason for this to be clickable since it doesn't really land on any noticeable rhythm

00:46:042 (1,2) - should've been a 1/1 since you clearly wanted to emphasise the vocals

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Please listen to the vocals.
It is true that there is no distinct sound, but it is ok to put a notes along with the vocal.
you said ''important vocals'' at another mod
I think the same way about this.

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it would be nice if these were emphasised more since they're the important vocals of the chorus
00:46:571 (1,2) -
00:57:865 (1,2) -

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If emphasize it here, the gap in the previous section will dead.

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00:52:042 - this vocal seems kind of dominant enough to not be in such pasive position of a slidertail but active instead

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01:00:512 - this one too

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I think these sliders work well enough for the next section.

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01:06:689 (3,4,5) - these could all be circles and represent the growing intensity of drums by slightly increasing the spacing of each circle more - having 1/2s here feels a bit dull

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I don't really like such tricks in Insane.
also, by suppressing this a little, the next stream and kick slider will stand out.

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01:09:159 (1,2,3) - is very uncomfortable to play since it's the same linear angle as 01:08:453 (7,8,9,10) -

Perhaps you can try changing the movement at 01:09:159 (1,2,3) - perpendicularly like what you did at 00:57:159 - to 00:57:865 -

would be no issue if you were using linear movement the whole map but 01:08:453 - kinda came out of nowhere

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I think it's sufficient as an accent to continue after the chorus.

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01:22:394 (3) - nothing here in music, could stack 01:22:218 (2) - on 01:22:571 (4) -

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a little sound on here.
I have put a circle here to differentiate it from the later part.

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01:22:394 (3) - remove this tbh

kinda undermines the drums you wanted to highlight at 01:21:512 (5,6) - 01:22:042 (1,2) - 01:23:277 (1,2) - etc

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i already answer about this

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