00:46:844 (1,2,3,4) - rhythm here is a little difficult to read/play, maybe:
00:57:094 (1,2) - might be mistaken as a double too often, could u space this a little more?
02:12:435 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - https://i.imgur.com/BZPZrti.png this would be cool + make it clearer that its 1/3 cuz its smth newer
02:12:435 (1,2,1,2,1,2) -
02:24:287 (1,2,1,2,1,2) -
02:27:250 (1,2,1,2,1,2) -
02:30:213 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - this one maybe not but id still do it
02:40:388 (3,4,1) - feels kinda tight then it gets followed with explosive movement 02:40:788 (1,2,1) -
i would try to rework the patterning to flow a little better/feel comfier cuz this patterning feels a little too awkward and stands out in this section
02:47:788 (1) - the amount of stacking up to this point (starting 02:46:888 (2) - ) would probably get overwhelming since it feels new, this is an important note to hit so i would space this out a little more just so its easier to read/hit
02:50:988 (3) - i would make this first note different somehow, seeing 5 notes of this would feel unexpected in the moment
03:01:088 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - could increase spacing here a liiiittle bit just for nice contrast / it feels more fitting anyways
03:15:888 (1,2) - spacing here is a little too much compared to the rest of the jumps in this section
03:26:688 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - feels a bit jumpscarey, could u make 03:26:688 (1,2,3,4) - smaller? second square can remain the same
03:57:795 (1,2,3) - nc :pray:
or avoid stacking the 3 on top of a note so its cleaner/easier to read