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00:16:037 - vs. 01:44:037 -

the second verse is kinda undermapped with less spacing usage (if u compare for example 00:16:037 (1,2,3,4,5,1,3) - & 01:44:037 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - or 00:19:037 (3,4,5,6) - & 01:46:704 (3,4,5,6,7) - ) which doesn't make much sense considering the music same, i'd even argue to slightly buff spacing in second verse more in certain parts where vocals get intense like 01:46:704 (3,4,5,6,7) -

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00:53:371 - In the kiai sections you kinda spam this rhythm too much (either with 1/2 or 3/4 sliders, it basically feels the same to tap)

This gets pretty repetitive when you use it despite the vocals having a held note in some parts vs. a note on each beat, so I think you could do more rhythm contrast to highlight the vocal phrases.

For example, 00:56:037 (1,2,3,4,5) - this could be 1/1 slider + 3 circles + slider

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00:53:371 - In kiai sections, there are a lot of high spacing/patterning that stand out when they aren't really warranted by anything the song is doing, which takes away from other important parts that could use it. Would go through and nerf such spacings so that cymbals and other drum fills are better emphasized.

For example, this 01:04:871 (3,4) - 01:06:204 (4,5) - could be nerfed since they have similar spacing to this cymbal crash 01:07:204 (3,4) - with the second even coming off a wide angle. Would buff this even 01:11:704 (3,4,5,1) - bc it's super underwhelming compared to them.

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01:14:537 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 01:15:871 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - etc. The way most of these are patterned, it doesn't emphasize the last two notes 01:15:371 (6,7) - that well going into the pauses. You could make the spacing to 5 smaller so the 6-7 stands out.

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00:16:037 - This section feels a bit too dense for such calm part of the song; especially when compared to the chorus, some parts feel even more dense.

Would recommend incorporating more 1/1 sliders like here 00:21:704 (3,4) - and lowering some spacings like 00:17:204 (1,2,3) - 00:20:704 (4,5,6) - etc.

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fixed did 1/1 wherevre i could

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SAN

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