00:24:360 (3) - would make this a hyper instead of a slider for more emphasize on 00:24:480 (simmilar pattern at 00:26:280 but with drums instead of vocals)
Would make more sense if you would make 00:24:120 (2) - a repeat as this is supposed to be the spread dose and doing a double hyper is too much when 00:24:360 - is just a simple drum without any vocals.
For 00:35:280 (4,1) - I would map it completely different, having a 1/2 slider for 00:35:280 - then a circle for 00:35:520 - so you align with the downbeat as well. This way you have more focus on 00:35:520 -