00:05:217 - it is better to put the nc here, since this is considered a different part
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00:18:095 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2) its better to just do 1/4 here, because the player may be confused by using sliders following the vocals at this moment
00:40:216, 00:40:519, 00:40:822 - you also need to put notes here to maintain the sounds, as you did next
01:08:852 since it is allowed to use triples on the hard diff, use there, and there 01:09:004 use slider
немного руинит консистенси (весь парт под гитару замапан), но мне так по кайфу поэтому попробуем
01:10:822 - 01:13:095 - i suggest we diversify the part, otherwise the constant stacks on the sliders dont look diverse. for example:
чуть-чуть разнообразил чтобы выделить сильные удары, мб еще поменяю