Kegare Naki Yume

00:56:542 (5,6) - A triple here could be good because of that vocal distortion

00:59:233 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This could be more spaced or have a distinct pattern to emphasis better the drums

I think in this pattern the vocals are not represented 01:11:072 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -

01:16:049 (4,5,6) - This feels kinda random, you didn’t do this type of pattern again in the whole kiai and there’s nothing so drastic that needed this change of a pattern

01:20:220 (3,4,5,6) - Could be more spaced

01:26:273 (2) - There’s nothing here to need that big of a spacing comparing to the other sections

01:47:125 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - 1/4

02:06:229 (2,3,4) - would be cool to see this pattern used more or event expand on this idea

02:08:632 (3,5) - broken stack

02:26:946 (4,5,6) - vocals doesn't seem represented, just ncing and slight spacing increase would suffice

could do NC on 02:31:251 (5) - and then change 02:31:520 (7,8,9) - to kicksliders, I think triples stop the movement and doesn't fit the 1/2 vocals

02:57:600 (1) - This probably gonna cause a lot of slider breaks imo, maybe a circle into a spinner would be better?

I think a cut would fit better here since the spacing increase is not that big 03:12:127 (1) - https://imgur.com/a/mdYXmBM

NC 03:17:508 (1) - for patterning clarity

03:26:925 (5,6,7,8) - This chould have something to emphasize the difference in the guitar better, like 2 ¼ sliders or something.

03:27:194 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I think this doesn't have much impact right now, the spacing increase is very gradual, could go with more spacing and a corner similar to 03:26:656 (1) -

03:35:131 (1,2) - this is offbeat and not active for no reason

03:43:741 (7) - slow slider would go hard up until 03:46:701 (2) - I think u should start on drums on this little break

03:59:481 (3,4,5,6) - stream or kicksliders would be cool

04:19:391 (8) - this is very active on drums I think spinner is unfitting

04:19:930 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Could be like this to emphasis better the ripple of the drum.

Or mapped in a way to emphasize better the ripple.

could try a cut on 04:26:791 (1) - https://imgur.com/a/isv20KD

04:37:149 (4,5,6) - Could be a stream here instead of this ¼ sliders

04:37:687 (1,2,1,2) - these jumps in particular are way overdone for no reason and doesn't follow melody or intensity

04:39:571 (6) - I don’t think this circle is as emphasized as it looks, could be nerfed or be a slider end

04:39:840 (1) - beautiful