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00:28:369 (3,4) - weird rhythm maybe jus use 1/2 or 1/1 like how u do others

00:36:439 (8,1) - could use hyperdash here since it's such a notable transition + downbeat

00:45:210 (5) - would move to x:338 to ensure that 5~6 is clearly walkable

00:47:577 - there's notable drum here so please replace 00:47:490 (1) - with 1/4 double

00:52:051 (5) - slidertail very close to the border

00:59:770 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - prolly using too wide spacing w antiflow involved, would nerf a bit

01:11:437 (4,5) - feel like this could be spaced less cuz the vocal changes to a less strained sound here

01:25:297 (3,4) - nerf ds prolly

01:27:490 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - can u emphasise 3/4 rhythm w patterning

01:28:718 (6) - stronger sound on the red tick + more intense breath in thing maybe add some distance

01:36:263 (1,2,3,4) - per guideline hyperdashes that are basic-snapped (in this case, 4/3 and 1/2s) should not be used consecutively when different beat snaps are used, so i'd recommend making 1~3 non hyper to keep emphasizing the vocal on 4

01:53:279 - weird to ignore this w both vocal and drum

01:55:121 (2,3,4,5,6) - too much for a rain, breaks guideline and theres not even a distinct sound on 01:55:472 -

01:55:384 - vocal sound is here so you should move 01:55:472 (3) to 1/4 earlier

02:06:086 (1,2) - spacing between this is kinda fat and makes it rather snappy, would jus use 1/2 rhythm tbh

02:08:893 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this whole part is more dense than it should be which makes it hard to follow which rhythm is being prioritised. have more gaps for proper contrast and see my diff for spread reasons

02:12:665 (4) - unnecessary

02:13:103 (1,2,3) - 3/4 rhythm, (2) should b emphasised instead

02:19:331 (6,1) - seems a bit far other dashes are around 2-2.2x

02:20:121 (1,2,3,4) - nerf prolly

02:25:384 (5,1) - try making (5) like this

02:26:436 (4,5,6) - bit edgy

02:56:612 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - can u make the wind down more apparent, spacing doesnt seem too different when song decreases

02:56:787 (2,3) - 02:57:138 (5,6) - higher snapped hyperdashes should not be used with higher snapped dashes, please make 2~3 and 5~6 clearly walkable

02:57:840 (10,1) - add hyperdash for transition in rhythm?

02:58:015 (1,2,3,4,5) - maybe have 2 sliders w jus dashes so theres better contrast as pitch increases