00:12:681 (94) - if you intend on only mapping sounds like 00:12:232 & 00:12:411, then this should be deleted
00:16:363 (124,125,126) - shouldn't this 1/6 be on 00:16:184 to be consistent with the previous instances? also when you do this, dont forget to add a note on 00:16:453
00:21:124 (161) - would k this note and delete 00:21:214 which puts more emphasis on the lack of melody (my best explanation for it)
00:53:190 (411,413) - i mean i get why these are finishers, but its inconsistent with the rest of the map until this point. i would either make these normal, or make more finishers (either is fine)