00:11:226 (4,5,6) - more of a small personal thing, but I feel like using a curved pattern instead of just a straight line follows the circular flow from 00:10:851 (3) - better, other than working well as a specular version of 00:09:726 (3,4,5) - :P
Something like this could be cool:
00:26:226 (3,4,5) - could be cool to make this linear to since your pattern for 00:20:976 - 00:26:976 goes:
wide (?(idk how to describe)) 00:21:726 (3,4,5) - > linear 00:23:226 (3,4,5) - > wide 00:24:726 (3,4,5) - > wide 00:26:226 (3,4,5) -