in this part 01:03:536 until the beginning of the kiai it feels not very intense compared to what is heard in the song, you could increase the intensity a little so that there is a contrast in that part since that part is close to the kiai and the song sounds more intense and the spacing is very similar to the previous part from here 00:39:422 to here 01:00:498
Banyak banget nih unnecessary overlap, karena beberapa part itu udah beda comboing/pattern. Kayak contohnya: